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Wednesday 2 January 2013

my girl chap 11



My girl: chapter 11:

journey to Lucknow...(1)






They planned Monday morning, they will meet in front of her house and then leave together to Lucknow…the weeding will be on Sunday but the bride and groom families will celebrate all the week this wedding, so all were invited to spend all the week there in the luxurious mansion in Sheesh mahal…
He will come to take her, of course they will not travel with bike, and they decide to take her car…
When the door is opened…
He doesn’t have the time to admire her…she pushed him inside:
-my father is here! And wanted to see you before we leave!
When he enters, Mr Shashi was there, smiling:
-Arnav! Good morning!
Arnav looked at his face…it means he’s Garima’s husband or ex husband…he saw like a severe old woman sitting beside him…looking at Arnav with disgusting expression
-she’s dadi!
Khushi whispered in his ear
-so severe! Don’t mind!
Ar:-good morning!
While Arnav was confused, Khushi was amused seeing him like that…
Shashi:-Arnav! I know you will take care of my little daughter! Still, I should send a bodyguard with you, to protect you!
Kh:-Dad!  No need!
Shashi:-Oh yes!
Dadi:-no arguing about that! Send even two!
Arnav:-or four!
Arnav said ironically, he hates already dadi by just noticing the way she was looking at him from head to bottom
Kh:-but Akash will be already behind us with his car!
Shashi:-khushi! enough! Time to leave now! Take care, ok?
-yes!
She said kissing his cheek and the cheek of her dadi
Dadi whispered :
-I hope he’s only a friend! Like you said!
Khushi just smiles and winked to a Dadi who is fuming…
Khushi and Arnav left…
He hated rich people…so damn pathetic and hypocrite…
He was imaging a journey with only her and him and here there was a driver and bodyguard sitting in front and him and her in the back and yeah …the little cherry on the top, he thought…another one (bodyguard) comes and sits beside him…
Not even a chance to speak with her properly…
She looks at him, he seems surprised, frustrated and angry…
Khushi also has enough of her father and dadi, she knows that it’s a simple wedding and she was going with her friends too…what was the point to send all those men…
But, her father was informed about what happened with Shyam that day…and of course he’s reacting that way, being over protective….
Khushi smiles looking at Arnav, she’s also frustrated, she whispered in his ear:
- sorry!
She holds his hand …
-I know you don’t like all this! But it’s ok! Let’s bear them a little (she whispered in his ear)
When she was so close from him, she could smell him…he’s fresh and smells that soap he used…
Kh:-being my boyfriend means meeting my severe family and bearing those men along with me!
She said to make the atmosphere soft…
He’s looking at her a little angrily but couldn’t do more…he doesn’t speak…he’s silent…
She starts playing with his hand on hers…with his fingers…touching with her hands every finger…
He stops her by taking away his hand…
-you know, you should act like you were my real boyfriend! …remember the deal?
He looks at her but silently…
She looks at his neck:
-mmm you’re my boyfriend from today, till Sunday night!
She said but he was silent…she looks at him and to break this silence, she said:
-where is your locket?
-….
-where it is?
-….
Silently, he puts his hand on his pocket and takes it off, she takes it from his hand:
-how beautiful!...it’s writing a big A…first letter of your name with a date?...your birthday?
-you thought I born in 1979?
Khushi was reading it!
-yes! Not you!...your mum?
-mmm…the locket is hers and she gifts it to me!...her name is Aarti!
-Aarti (Khushi smiles)…and your dad?
-My dad is Sadeeq!
-sadeeq?
-yes! a muslim name!
Khushi looked at him, surprised…
-it was kind of love marriage!...kind of not possible marriage!
Arnav said seriously…
Khushi looks at him, she wished he will not stop…she wanted to know but she’s sure he will stop…
-a long story!
He’s not ready to tell the entire story…
She looked at the locket…
-she was really beautiful, your mum!
-yeah!
Her hands on his locket gives him goose bumps, he felt her so close to his life and past…and parents…
When she looked at him, he hoped she will not ask for more about that story…he, himself, he doesn’t know very much and what he knows makes him sad, so sad…
Kh:-from my mum, I didn’t know anything, even about their marriage or how they fall in love…
She said looking at him, those beautiful eyes full of tears…
-it’s ok!
He said to comfort her…she will know soon…he was waiting for the moment to tell Garima, to confront her…and then to tell Khushi about the truth…
She looked at him and poses her head on his shoulder
The locket still on her hand…
-let’s change the topic! I want to know a little about you…
He looks to the other side and then to her …
-you’re my boyfriend! They will ask me about you!...it’s so easy, I will ask you some questions: What you hate the most in someone?
-hypocrisy!
-me too! But also when someone is unfaithful! And what do you love the most in someone?
-mmm...being simple and franc!
-being strong enough to carry me! (she said smiling)
-we’re talking about values here!
-then like you being clear and franc…if someone don’t lie then he’s good person!
He smiles…sometimes, she expresses herself like a child and then she has a cute way to do it!
-your favorite dish?
-khir!
-yummy!!! For me everything…awww…by just thinking…aahhh…I love all, all of the dishes!...strawberry ice cream, chocolate cake…mmm….everything…
-chocolate and ice cream are not a dish!
He smiles again, amused by the way she was telling all that, her eyes bright also like a kid…and she smiles too…taking her place closed to him in the car…
Kh:-your favorite color?!
-I don’t have!
-come on! Please…for me, it’s pink and white! And you?
-ok…black!
She smiles silently and looks at him, seriously, now:
-mmm...Arnav …have you ever fall in love?
He looks at her…
-I refuse to answer!
-please!
-if I ask you the same question?
-I was thinking I felled in love but seems like it wasn’t that!
-it was what then?
-I don’t know! I wasn’t able to know that when you don’t feel safe with someone than you better stop being with him!
He looks at her:
-and when you feel safe with someone?
-then…it should be your heart who choose that person for you!
-what a philosophy!
-I’m right! So tell me…did you ever fall in love with a girl?
He was silent…doesn’t want to answer this…
He looks at the other side and finds that the bodyguard besides him was already sleeping…
Khushi thought:
What if he’s in love with someone else…who? Another girl? Maybe nicer! Maybe as good as him…maybe so cute and generous…maybe he should have hug her? Maybe he’s now thinking about her???...or kiss the way he kissed her or maybe more….maybe she would have seen all of him…touched his body…kissed him inch by inch…taste his love…he said I love you to her…maybe she was waiting for him, now…maybe she has the opportunity to be his girlfriend without a deal…and maybe…maybe…
She looks at him…
He looks at her…
The good mood of the previous moments transformed into a bad atmosphere…
She took a bottle of water and starts drinking to that she could get away a little from him…because she was so close from him…she needs to think about her feelings towards that person she barely know…
She wasn’t able to do anything…
Her expression telling all…
Arnav was amused looking at her…
It was enough being silent…
He was satisfied…that she’s worried even because he’s silent and doesn’t want to answer this…
She is avoiding his gaze, she looking other side…all this because she maybe thought that he’s in love…
She finally looked at him…
She takes his hand and wanted to give him the locket in her hand…
The moment her hand touched his hand, he catches her hand…holding it with the locket…
He looks at her…
-what?
-what?
she wanted to free her hand from his but he holds her tight…
She looked at him…
He was looking straight at her eyes…he smirks…
She tries to avoid him but he has her hand and she was pinned against the car’s door and him…
He nodded negatively his head…
She looked at him…
He smiles…
After a while…
She smiles too…
That no was an answer…
He doesn’t fall in love before…
Okay!
It was crazy all that…but she’s feeling good…now…
They were acting silently…
She opened the car’s window and the breeze comes strong, attacking her face…she wanted to breath…she felt all blushing after that wait for his answer…
Why? She wanted him to say no?...because she doesn’t want him to feel anything for another…
Damn it! She’s feeling already that he’s…he’s for her…she doesn’t know how but…it’s like that…
Arnav feeling the breeze caressing violently his face…it was clod…but refreshing…what was that?...she smiles because he said no? because he never fall in love…firstly, he should know what was love?...
Her hair comes to caress his face…
Again covering all his face…
Fresh sweet soft smell of her hair comes to him…
He wanted to take her hair away but he couldn’t the breeze was so much strong…
When she turns his side…
She takes her hair away…
But again…the wind was strong making her hair and his hair flying…
She smiles shyly…
And he smiles to her…
Both trying…
And it was like a romantic movie…
Even more beautiful…
Like a dream…
A soft one…
Their eyes meet…
And some words was said without using words…
He slowly leaned…
Looking at that angelic face…
She thought he will kiss her…
She closes her eyes tight…
She felt his fingers taking her hair behind her ear…
And then she felt the wind was stopped and she opens her eyes to see that he returned to his place…and then the window was closed by him…
And the bodyguard next to him was looking lazily at the both of them…like he was watching a romantic drama…
Khushi noticed him to stop looking and he automatically turns his face to the other side…
She looked at Arnav and they both burst out from laughing…  


Note: hope it's good 
please tell me
find it little crazy their love me too... :p
but this arshi are different like I said previously
they are taking life like it is 
and then Khushi is so bubbly and happy that Arnav is affected by that and starting behaving like her, forgetting his resolutions about he's poor and she's rich
continue reading it will be more intersting
and then their past will be so important in this SS
please tell me your opinions girls
readers be many to comment...
love you all...
people who maked me used to their comments and then disappear like that: where are you?
Laxshalovearshi: you're a sweetheart, you <3
 

23 comments:

  1. Awesome update
    i love Arnav and khushi in this ff
    khushi is so sweet and cute
    continue soon please and thank u for pm me
    Happy new year to everyone :)
    [ASR6262]

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  2. i like how they take every thing as it come :)
    the window scene was beautiful !
    (IF user nadiaben)

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  3. loving this ff so cute dadi lord help that woman loving their chemistry loved awesome update can't wait for her reaction to meeting her mom thanks for the pm

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  4. love arshi in ff. lovely update thnx 3 pm n update
    lakshyaNkt

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  5. Loved d update
    Thanx for pm
    dey r so cute pls write
    more romance between arshi
    --MISHTEE--

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  6. loved it dear:)

    mandy15

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  7. nice update

    kushigowda(IF)

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  8. awesome update.........
    loved it.......

    thanks for the pm in IF.....pavi1

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  9. awesome updt

    luv it

    updt soon

    thanks for pm

    summaiyasayed

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  10. Amazing ...
    Love Arnav & khushi so cute ....
    pinky89

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  11. HEY CRAZY I CAN SAY A SILENT ROMANCE BTW LES DEUX.FIRST LA FACON QU'IL DIT 4 BODYGUARD C'ETAIT GENIAL HHH COOMENT DIT EN ARABE "MA7MELCH CA GRANDE MERE".
    SECONDLY I LIKE HIS SILENCE AT THE CAR ,BUT WHY THE LOCKET WAS AT HIS POCKET?
    and the most part i love was how she thought arnav has a girl hhh crazy khushi thirsty can't imagine him with another one.
    really a cute romance .

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    1. najat
      :DDDDDDDDDD you're making me laugh like never
      ma7mlch sa grand mère ....hhhhhhhhhhhhhh c'était le mot exact mais pas de synonyme en ang :DDDD
      see how much our arabic language is rich ;)
      yeah I'm proud :D
      najat thank you so much :*

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  12. i cann't tell u how much happy i am after reading ur reply.
    that was really so sweet of u.
    arnav nd khushi of my girl r totally diff 4m ippknd but nothing matter when the writer of it is my fav crazy girl.it seems so natural when u write.the way u write unfaithful makes me amazed.
    i love when u say to us that u r the crazy girl nd show us some of ur crziness.
    hope to meet u nd the man of my love barun one day.
    lots of love nd also fell some sweet silent for this amazing silence romance.
    xo xo
    LOPA

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  13. darling!!

    i absolutely love how the story is progressing....i am so excited about the wedding!!dear i might be late but i will never disappear...this is my next best favourite story after forced marriage....i really hope if IPKKND season 2 happens they make it this one....love you lots..catching up with all the updates

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  14. hi crazy head........
    u updated .......thxx........
    it was cute......
    this was like initial stage of gf n bf......
    so their journey started..........
    khushi was eager to know the answer.......
    n yes arnav said no so its lit up her face....
    umm bodyguards......they will ruin the romantic moments...
    waiting fr more romance........
    - Akorshi -

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  15. à very cuté update

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  16. wow this was an amazing update.... want to see more romance between arnav and kushi!!!

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  17. awesome update
    loved it
    thanks for the pm
    drunkiiebabe

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  18. OMG Both Khushi's and Arnav's moment in the car is soooo adorable and cute ! Can't get enough of their cuteness which means Im waiting for your next update dear ! Sorry for being demanding but I cant stop from asking u about your future updates ! I am big Fan of u ! YOu called me a sweetheart, Thank you soo much dear ! Love you but your r the gorgeous sweetheart ! Loved it ! Plz continue soon !

    Laxshalovearshi
    Your friend !!

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  19. full of sweet romance......:">....
    loved it.....

    -minar(if id: xyzsm)

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  20. thanks......great work
    ~udaymanyata07~

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  21. Amazing update. LOved it.

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  22. Arnav uses his mother last name(.....i dont think raizadas a Muslim last name) So does that mean that his parents were never able to marry?ohhh now i wana know more about his parents.

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