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Thursday 24 January 2013

For my angel chap 13




 For my angel:
chap 13:

The Deal



Ar:-Miss Gupta…
-you??!...
He stops and looks at her…in her eyes…
He could see she’s shocked and nervous and troubled…
Khushi looks at him…for awhile…she doesn’t care…neither he’s making her scared nor she was ready to listen to him….she wants to talk so...she continues talking to him…pointing him by her index….
Kh:-you?! and me?????!...you! And…I mean: I…with you…???
Khushi looks at him with questioning eyes…she takes her index away and looks at him…
Kh:-Talk! (she said all troubled, the cheeks red from anger)
He was about to talk but again, angry like her but…she cuts him…
-what do you…think when you think about that?
-excuse me?!
Troubled, she couldn’t find her words…
He was angry but cold and indifferent….
She was angry but the blood is boiling inside her and many thoughts are fighting in her brain….just be imagining him being her husband…she looks at him…he goanna be her husband….
Means…
Means…she will cook for him?...she will eat with him?...she will talk with him? Think about her future with him? Sleep with him?...and maybe she will also have to kiss him...what???....her gutter mind was on for awhile…she looks at his lips…and then looks down immediately…like a teenager…she felt shy and she regrets that look…that “not innocent” look…
Kh:-I mean…how did…this…when you thought about this…how? like that?....I mean…like that…this idea…I…Listen! I can’t …me, I can’t be your wif…(she couldn’t complete that word, she whispered it) I don’t even think about you as a friend…and now, I have to accept you as my…No…I…No…
Arnav looks at her…he was already angry by all what she said to him within a second…but God! Why? Why he’s finding the way she angry that much childish…and…that much…NO! NO! Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada….!!!
He felt that he was enough passionate…he didn’t say anything about all that…and here he wanted to talk and she’s talking non sense…with those eyes staring at him and then looking down and then back at him, challenging him…
He felt that awkward feeling and then all angry anew, he said:
Ar:-ok! So you’re not agreeing about that! Fine! I was here to preciously ask you about your opinion before we fix the date!...ok…then…
He was about to leave the room but she shout…
Kh:-NO!
He turns his head to look at her…
Yes, she intrigues him…that girl…she will drove him crazy…
-No!...wait….mmm…I mean…(she hesitates) about the marriage…it’s…I mean…We should discuss that…
-what do you want to discuss?
She looks at him all serious…a thing that he should know now…she should tell him about, she tell that firmly:
Kh:-if I’m going to marry you, you should know that I’m doing this only for the sake of my buaji…
She said that in one go and eyes down, she prays her Devi Maya secretly and then after awhile she looks up to him…to his reaction….if he will go she will not retain him…and about Buaji promise…she could marry any other boy…right?!
Arnav looks at her…he seems to be little surprised about her frankness…he was about to reply when his mobile rings…
He hangs up immediately …
-hi baby!
“Hi baby”?? and he is asking for her hand?
-yes my angel…
“yes my angel”?? and he’s now about to fix his marriage with her…???
-No…I’m coming soon…ok ok ok…I will not be late…but just don’t get angry against me…ok?...promise?....I love you too…careful! No! no! don’t trouble HP! Play the aunty Game…yes, it’s fun…yes….ok…my Lily!
Khushi looks at him…he can be sweet…but this can happen only with his angel…Lily…
Khushi smiles a little thinking about her…she misses her…it’s been so long…a week without seeing her…she was busy with Buaji and she didn’t see her…
Ar:-So…Miss Gupta?...should we fix the date or not?...if no, we will leave, if yes, you should know that we have something in common; I haven’t any emotions towards you too!…the marriage is just a sort of a deal…for the two of us…you’re doing it for the sake of your Buaji! I’m doing it for my angel…I’m ok to support you helping your Buaji and giving her the best conditions possible to get the best treatment…you support me taking care of Lily!...she wants you…to be…to be…
Kh:-her mum?
Khushi looks shocked at him, first and then she takes her time thinking and looking at him…
She has the confirmation…: she hates that man to the core…
She hates that language too much…
But…
But…
Only that name was enough for her to nod her head positively…
Lily…
She wanted to enter Lily’s life…
Yes, she wanted to take this girl in between her arms and teach her to not to be rude like Papaa…but be always an angel…
She looks at him and tends her hand…
-I’m ok!
He looks at her eyes…and then at her hand….he takes his time…
She’s confident and fabulous and he doesn’t like that too much…
He holds finally her hand to make their “deal” an official one…
Deal…or promise…
When those hands join each other…seems like an electric shock attacks both of them…
Both take his hand off…and gets out of the room…
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They get out…
And by that “deal” or like that they arrange them to call it…not only their engagement was fixed for the next Saturday of the same week…
But their marriage will take place the same month…
Khushi shivered when she heard that less than three weeks and she will be Mrs. Raizada….
And because Buaji can’t stay alone after the marriage of Khushi…both will remove to RM…
Both: Buaji and Khushi….
Kh:-what about Lily?
They all look at her…
Nani:-what about her?
Kh:-I mean…we should inform her that I’m goanna enter her life…I’m goanna be with her…
Arnav looks at her…
Damn it!
Why she should be that much…fabulous????!...fabulous in thinking about that…
Lily doesn’t know about that story about him marrying Khushi…
Yes, she wanted Khushi to be her mum…
But… she want to her Papaa to be married again???
Khushi thought about it …what if she hates her…knowing that?
Many kids don’t want to their parents to get another life…
Lily will not be informed about the deal…
No one from the family knows about what they spoke in the room or their ideas…
Lily…
Kh:-I want to inform her myself!
She said looking at Arnav…
About Khushi-Lily stuffs…Arnav doesn’t plan to make any objection…
He saw in her file and in her gestures for those days…that she knows something about kids…more than him…much more…
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RM:
Lily’s room:
Lily was playing when she felt two hands coming and hiding her eyes…she can’t see who is there…she wanted to know who is hiding her eyes, don’t letting her see….
Lily:-who?
With her soft hands she touched the fingers don’t letting her to see…
Lily:-not paa?! Not HP!...than who?
The voice:-guess?
And then the hands get off the delicate face…
Lily immediately turns…
All happy…
All surprised…
All excited…
Li:-Mith!!!
It was Khushi who comes especially for her…that same day…she comes along with Raizada Family, letting Buaji with Payal…only to talk with that angel…and to be honest…because she missed her too much…
Kh:-my baby!
Lily cupped Khushi’s face in between her tiny hands…and she looks at her…and then she hugged her tight…tighter…Khushi could feel her little heart beating too much…from happiness…
Lily was playing on the carpet in the floor…and now Khushi was on the floor…and Lily was standing and looking at Khushi like that…
She missed her Miss…her father explains to her that Miss is absent because her Buaji is sick but still…she missed her…and that too too much!
And then she has the idea to ask…:
Lily:-your buaji…fine?
Her look and her voice and her innocence and the way she asked her about her Buaji makes Khushi all vulnerable…two tears come out of her eyes…
Kh:-she’s fine for now…you missed me?
The little angel hugs her so tight again…Khushi smiles at that power Lily puts to hug her every time…
Lily:-me…I love you…
Kh:-and me…I love you more!
Lily smiles satisfied about her Miss’s answer…she’s happy now…
She pecks her two cheeks and Khushi does the same, pressing more…
Little Lily presents her toys and dolls to Khushi…
Khushi played a little and then she takes Lily on her lap…
-you want me to be always with you?
Lily nodded positively…
-so you want me to stay with you? (Lily nodded)…what if I will be living here with you…
-you?...you can?
Khushi smiles and nodded…
Lily smiles and excited, she gets up…
-will you?
-you know for that…I should mmm…marry your…marry your papaa…means me and your papaa should be married to that I can stay here…
Lily looks at khushi all thinking about all that in her little head…
-want you marry him, please…and thtay (stay) with me?...Paa is good…he’s good…and nithe (nice)…he has many books…he can tell us both many many thtories (stories)…he knows all flowers names and he…
Lily takes a deep breath as she talked too much, putting all her energy and looks at Khushi with her cute, innocent beautiful big eyes…waiting like a little cat…for khushi to talk… to say something …
But Khushi was fascinated how that little baby gets it and how she talks praising her papaa and how she’s convincing her to stay and to marry him…
She smiles to her…
Lily serious face transformed to a happy face…
She holds Khushi’s neck…
-I will marry your papaa…
Lily smiles…
Her noise touching Khushi’s noise…
They have that embrace that only mums and daughters know about it…
-you’re my mum now?
Khushi nodded…without breaking that tight embrace…
Both need each other…
Arnav was present during that entire private discussion…
He wasn’t seeing one angel…
But two…
Khushi was a gift from God…
An angel…sent from an unknown place…
To make his own angel happy…
He felt safe…
He felt good…
He was ready to make Khushi stay with them from this evening…
Precap: The Marriage…
Waiting for your lovely comments…

23 comments:

  1. awesome
    super
    wonderful
    just loved it
    i loved lily reaction
    she is sooooo cute

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  2. Love it very
    cute
    sweet
    different
    emotional
    and interesting story
    waiting for romantic and hot update too ;)
    Awesome update lily is so cute i just love her
    cant wait to see some beautiful and cute scenes between lily Arnav and khushi
    ASR6262

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  3. it was the best chapter
    lily reaction is awesome
    waiting for Arshi marriage
    how will their relationship proceed
    amazing waiting!!!!

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  4. emotional update beautifully done loved how khushi wanted to ask liliy before saying anything loved for once asr tought of her in a good way and thought she was angel and was fabulous loved lily and khushi bond awesome update

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  5. lovely update...
    so its a deal that a good start ...
    he is doing it for lily but khushi is doing not only for her buaji
    i feel she loves lily very much that she wants her to be her family ..
    i love the way arnav had started seeing khushi as an angle...
    and i am sure he will fall in love with lily's mum...

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  6. Read pt 6 - 13 just love the way u hv developed d story till date love d bonding b/w kushi n lily waiting for the story to develop for now its for buaji n lily's sake but waiting to c the love blooming b/w arhi
    nishi755(IF)

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  7. Fantastic update.
    I Loved it.

    So Arnav and Khushi made a deal.
    I loved Lily and Khushi talks. How Khushi explained to Lily that in order for KHushi to be Lily's mom she needs to marry her Papa.
    I sdored the way Lily was trying to convince KHushi that Arnav is nice and his many attributes. How sweet is Lily.
    Awesome precap.

    I am looking forward to reading more.

    Thanks.
    Zafi

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  8. ''Paa is good…he’s good…and nithe (nice)''.........''He wasn’t seeing one angel…But two…''
    these line r amazing my apu
    super cute update ever
    yes u predict me right
    wow next part will be about marriage
    can't wait to see coming more cuteness from u
    AND THE THOUGHT THAT U PUT THE SONG HERE FOR ME MAKE ME FELL SPECIAL DEAR
    thank u so much my apu
    allah bless u with more talent
    ur lopa

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  9. hey amazing update
    so they are finally agreed to get married
    love the lily-hushi scene soo cute love their bond
    love seeing lily happy soo happy her wish came true
    cant wait to see what happends next
    upddarte soon

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  10. hey superb update yar
    jo bhi ho "DEAL" tho pakka hogay
    i am very happy for that
    in what ever conditions they will marry it will convert in to pure love
    as they are "made for each other"
    Lilly & her mith(miss) convo is superb yar
    i loved the way Lilly is convincing her mith for marriage
    by this we can say how much Lilly is loving khushi
    arnav is seeing his "two" angels wow
    PLZ don't jump directly in to marriage yar put some of the things which will happen before marriage
    in this you put Lilly-khushi's & arnav-khushi's scenes it will be fun to read
    waiting eagerly for next update

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  11. wow wow wow very veryyyyyyyyyyy beautiful lovely update...
    i loved Khushi-lily in this update very much....
    ha soon our Arhi is gng to get married

    from jenji08

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  12. Fabulous update.. Liked the way Kushi spoke to Lily about her marriage. I hope they will work out together to make this marriage a success and both of them start expressing their feelings towards each other openly. Arnav already has some feelings only thing is that he needs to understand that. Looking forward for the next update. Reality Truth - IF User

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  13. Awww update so cute.
    Khushi and lily's relation is very beautiful.

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  14. that DEAL was so cool lol !
    khushi way of revealing about the marriage to Lily was awesome ...Arnav your so lucky ;)

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  15. Finally the days gone come ... Was really emotional update I just loved the way lily was trying to say about her father good points .. Can't wait for next post it soon

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  16. loved it......cute lily....love u too.....

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  17. Ohoh what a wonderful part . You give each scene it's right . So both of them take it as a deal.
    Emotional scene btw lily and khushi , how his angel convinced khushi to marry her papa mmmm to make her agreed . Thanks so mush my crazy girl for this DEAL

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  18. Awww...it was super duper cute update..specially the part where Lily is convincing her miss to marry her papa..

    Humayra(IF)

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  19. Super cute update

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  20. superb updt

    luv it

    updt soon

    summaiyasayed

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  21. awesome update
    emotional
    drunkiiebabe

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  22. oho khushi's feeling for lilly is effecting arnav's feelings for khushi. cool

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  23. excellent part of the story

    loved ma daughter bonding

    ARNAV think both as angel loved it

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