Monday, 3 December 2012

the forced marriage part 55

The Forced Marriage

Part 55 and Final part...

 

Note:
yes, my babies...
this is the end of my first baby, my FF...
I wanted a romantic end...
and I think it's romantic one...well
all this is thanks to you all...
when I wrote the first part of my FF, to be honest
I wasn't sure people will like the concept...and I wasn't sure about what will come next...I was happy when people want to see what will happen next and continue it...
it was a really good and lovely experience...
 I'm all happy about your comments and likes... and about knowing some of you...(god bless and protect you all)
  HUG...a big one to all my pretty friends, they will know themselves ;)
hey!...wait for a long epilogue
What the...
of course I will write a huge one...
so, Be Close 
xo xo the crazy Girl...
I will reply to each comment today so...do check the comments, here, after...I love you...

 

Khushi was shocked, surprised by his did…he’s taking off the ring but why ?!...but the way he’s taking off that ring was quite sexy that she was sure that nothing is wrong with what he did, still, she is worried…why is he doing that?!! She remembers the way he’s giving her that ring, ordering her to wear it, in the past…and she doesn’t know why but she smiles, seeing the difference between his behavior now and his behavior months back…now, her Arnav is becoming more and more romantic…still, in bed…this was another matter…he still dominate, he still harsh and she likes it!, not that she doesn’t want to lead things, sometimes, but she prefers him that way and seems like he knows her likes and dislikes, he knows her like himself and she gets surprised, always seeing that he’s doing the thing that she’s about to ask him for before she pronounce any word…Magic! She thought…but, he still mysterious to her, like this instant when he takes off the ring that way…
Payal:-khushi?...hi!...where are you? Daydreaming?
-Payal?
-yes? Payal!...now, come, they will exchange the rings, soon!
-yes! Let’s go!
Out…her eyes searched him…but he was nowhere to be seen…she tuned here and there but where is he…
Arnav was seeing her…tensed…in a corner, he was enjoying seeing her throw his camera…zooming her…he is smiling, seeing her tensed, searching him with her beautiful eyes and then faking a smile to Payal who was talking to her…he zoom her eyes…and then her smile…It will be a sincere one, soon…and in his camera screen, he was seeing, she’s looking his way…he smiles and she starts doing some faces expressions to him: pulling out her tongue like kids, trying to arch one eyebrow like him, moving her head like old aunties do when they are angry…he laughs from his heart and she laughs too…he smiles, now, seeing her not throw the screen…he closed the camera, giving it to Akash, without breaking the eye contact with her…
Arn:-you’re phenomenal! (he whispered in her ears)
She smiles…he holds her hand….
Arn:-can you repeat for me how you arched only one eyebrow!
She looks at him and did it but did it wrong…he laughs again
Kh:-what? (she pouted her lips)
Ar:-I love you!
Khushi smiles:-why you took my ring?
Arn:-look! I think that Aman will give my sister the engagement ring!
Khushi looks towards the couple and smiles but she was disappointed she doesn’t receive any answer from him!
Aman and Anjeli are looking perfect together…thought  this is why their respective families accept this union so fast…
Anjeli was in her baby pink saree…looking so beautiful and Aman deserves that beauty as he was looking only at her…paying attention at all her moves with a protective gaze…taking her hand between his, he kisses her hand and then his mother gives him the ring which he puts it on the finger of his Anjeli and Khushi was there to give Anjeli the ring which she puts in Aman’s finger…
Families and guests clap…throwing sweet comments of congratulations…Anjeli and Aman are smiling like stupid, feeling somehow reveled…after taking this important step…they had the blessing of the older ones and Anjeli hugs her mum and Payal and mami tight…she hugs Khushi more tightky, knowing that, if she’s here today, getting engaged it’s only thinks to her: khushi…
Khushi hugs Anjeli  back and winked to Aman…she was about to walk towards Arnav but he’s the one who walks towards her, holding her hand…first, he kisses her sister’s forehead and then he looks at Aman from head to bottom angrily…Aman gets nervous, his smile vanished but finally Arnav smiles, he gives him a high five but it was too strong…that Aman holds his hand from pain...
Arnav looks at Khushi:
Ar:-ready?
Kh:-what?
Ar:-take a deep breath...(he said with his husky voice)
He looks at the other and speaks a little loudly:
Ar;-Attention, please!...
All the mouths shut and all the eyes are on him, now…
Khushi was a little bit worried, he was holding her hand, for this, he knows, she will be shy and nervous, seeing all those people staring at them….even him, he is nervous because he has to speak a lot to explain the situation of someone who is already married but wants to get engaged and married anew:
-when we get married, me and my wife Khushi (he looks at her smiling to assure her)…it was in Lucknow and then (he looks at his mum) my mother, my sister (he looks at Anjeli) and all my family hasn’t the chance to be present…it was fast (he looks at Khushi)…I know it wasn’t perfect, it wasn't good at all...(he said a little bit said)...but I think and she thinks as well that our marriage was a blessing…a blessing that we met and have the chance to know each other…
Tears drop, immediately, from Khushi’s eyes but why he’s saying all that to them?!?
He continues:
-it was maybe a blessing but I want it to be a dream like!...I want to my family to be present at my wedding and I want to my wife to enjoy her wedding fully…so! I’m announcing to all of you that our marriage will be in the same time as Aman-Anjeli’s wedding…all the rituals will be in the same time…
He was looking at his mother and saw tears of joy in her eyes…that was exactly what he wants to see…khushi’s hand is so cold in his hand…he knows she’s crying, getting emotional…he whispers near to her ear:
-Khushi…
he makes her look at him...
Khushi starts sobbing like babies…
He wiped her cheeks, amused…
-shhh…look! They are all looking at us, baby…(he whispered again to that no one could hear anything but her)…we didn’t have the occasion to do that before …Asking you to marry me…you like it?...no, no…
But it was too late…she was in his arms crying and he has to calm her now, because still, he doesn’t propose, properly to her, yet…
Thanks god, all the guests are clapping…amused by the emotional-dramatic-romantic scene…
Aman and his father are whistling like in theatre and Aarti was trying to stop them…but she was too absorbed, seeing Arnav and Khushi…Anjeli joining her hands seeing them…her eyes are shining…side hugging her mum who is in tears…
Akash was holding Payal who is now…posing her head on his shoulder…getting affected...Akash gives her his hanky...
Mami, a little bit, jealous, still she doesn’t love that girl named Khushi too much…but she loves Arnav and couldn't say anything at all...
And Dadi was fuming…because days back, she was convincing him to divorce her…reminding him about his father and now…seems like all her words aren’t heard by him…he’s getting married, again with that girl…still…even, if he goanna marry her 1000 times, she still hates her…she will try to convince him, always to leave her…
Arnav pulled back to see his wife who still crying but he’s amused that every emotion bring her to his arms…and now the girl who don’t want even to that he touch her hand before the others, is hugging him before all those people…
Arnav holds her hand…
Leaned and sits in one knee…
He looks straight at her eyes:
-Now…I’m asking you Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada…will you marry me?
With that Arnav takes out a red box and open it…
-Will you marry me, Khushi?
Khushi looks at him…his face…his love reflected on his face…she can’t believe that…she looks at the red box…with that lovely ring inside…an engagement ring, a true one…
She heard some claps …
She has the reaction to take a look at the others to be sure she’s not dreaming…at Arpita’s peaceful smile, despite the tears… and all of them who are smiling and clapping…Anjeli was in heaven…joining her two hands like she was prying…Aman winks to her, smiling…she looks at Payal and this one yelled:
Payal:-come on! Say yes!
Akash was now taking a video with Arnav’s camera…
Khushi was looking at all this…but couldn’t understand or believe…is it her engagement?...is she dreaming?...is she… She was like she’s living a romantic movie…
No! it was even more romantic, more beautiful than all the movies…
Arnav:-you don’t want to say yes?
Khushi looks at him as he was talking Chinese…
Arpita:-Khushi?...are you ok?
Nani:-bitiya?
Before Khushi would fall ….about to faint by the emotion…losing her balance…Arnav was there to hold her, in his arms:
-KHUSHI!?!
She looks at him, eyes, half closed:
-Arnav…
-Are you ok?
-Arnav…yes! Yes!
He kisses the tears on her cheeks wiping them by his kisses….
-yes, what?
-yes! I accept but still I’m your wife, even before this…you don’t have to ask me….
-I know but…
Aman:-interesting this romantic show but there is some old aunties, in here, who are thinking this is a romantic drama and would ask for more scenes like that in next episode…so…
Arnav wanted to answer Aman but Aman was right…
He was holding Khushi in such inappropriate way…he has kissed her cheeks romantically…they was whispering to each other…ignoring the world around them…
Now…Khushi getting conscious by the situation, she stands by her own and he takes her hand to make her wear the ring…
She was all happy …still she couldn’t believe all that…
When Arnav makes her wear the ring and she’s about to make him wear his new ring too…
She noticed the engraver inside his ring and looks at Arnav…he was smiling… she wanted to kiss him on his lips…but she knows she can’t…
girls come and hugs her…a big hug…she took the blessing of her mother in law and Nani and mamiji and hesitates when she thought about Dadi, she looks around for her but she wasn’t there at all….

She heard piano sound and some wonderful and so romantic music is played…she doesn’t know about that piece of music but it was so…that music makes her heart beats fast and she looks at him and he was also looking at her too…
(do listen the music: it's rabba Ve on piano while you're reading this part...)
She smiles…
He smiles too…
He noticed her by the eyes to follow him…and she does…
Arnav walks  to the decorated poolside…
And Khushi was behind him…
The piano melody is following them…as well…
When she enters the poolside…
She can’t see him…at first…but she feels him… he’s there…
Before she pronounced his name…
She saw his face…smiling…
She understand…she shouldn’t say anything…
He holds her waist…
He knows as well that there are no more words to say…
His hand touches her soft cheek and she closes her eyes…
She holds him as well…so tight…making him so close to her…
She opens her eyes; gradually…she wanted to say I love you to him…
But her gaze was enough for him to know what she wanted to say…
He leaned…towards her lips to touch them…to kiss them…but she was faster than him and she takes his lips for a passionate one…and he kisses her back…
The soft breeze like holding them…encouraging them to be closer from each other…
Seems like all the bad memories are deleting from their minds…and a new happy life is waiting for them…
But the most important thing was they are together for the happiness and the sorrow…
They know that life can put them in many difficulties but…they are ready to face it all, only because they are together…
In his arms…she feels complete…
In her arms…he feels that he exist…
Her forced marriage was far away now because she could only see her present and future with him…
With him…she knows she’s protected…
With her…he knows he’s safe…
-Khushi…
-Arnav! Don’t say anything, please…
-I won’t…I’m goanna just act now…you know…some hard work is waiting for us…
-Arnav! (she bits her naughty husband, playfully, all smiling shyly)
-you know, I want to all our wedding to be recorded in videos…to that our baby could watch that!
-Arnav…I want to say something…but I’m really…should I tell you that?
-what? Of course you should tell me!
-it’s really so…embarassing...ohhh…I’m so confused but …
-tell me!
-Oh! I don’t know if you’re the right person to whom I should tell this but mum is not here  and you’re the second one, I could t…
-tell me, now!
 he keeps looking at her and she whispered in his ear something...
Arnav smiles:
Ar:-is that something someone could be shy of it?...I’m your husband Khushi…it’s normal that I know about your period…what?!!...two months and you didn’t get them???
He almost yelled…Khushi puts her hand on his mouth to stop him:
-shut up!
-of course! We make love every night and everything is alright, why I didn’t think about that before (he smirks)
-but I’m normal Arnav…I mean no nausea, nothing…still it’s not sure…I should visit a gynecologist tomorrow…
-No! I can’t we will buy a pregnancy test, now!
-No! Don’t!...tomorrow…both, we will visit the doctor! I want to be sure that way!
-ok! fine! let's be calm or...
He holds her:
-let me touch and I will tell you…
He touches her tummy…
-stop Arnav!...you will not be able to know by just touching!
-ok! Then I will kiss it
He kisses her tummy…
-Arnav! You don’t want to miss any occasion to be naughty? Isn’t it?
-you’re right!
-I know…
-come!
He takes her towards the pool…it wasn’t deep at all, water could only touch their feet to their ankles…he takes off his shoes and so she did…they stand inside the pool…where the moon image is reflected there… and that’s why Arnav wanted to that they stand there to see her face very clearly under the moon light…
Khushi all excited…and Arnav was just happy…but he couldn’t describe very well his mood in that moment…he's more than just happy...he just carries her and spins around...he puts her down...



He takes her waist but this time for a slow dance…as they still can hear the piano’s melody 
…both dance, slowly together holding each other…
Suddenly, they hear a voice…they turn and see Anjeli, Aman, Akash and Payal at the French window…
Aman :-hey jijaji! Why you prefer to dance here alone, you both! Come dance with us all!
Anjeli:-Khushi! You’re here? (She smiles excited)
Akash was smiling:-if bhai want to stay here, no problem…
Payal:-of course, it’s a problem, they are all asking for you inside, lovebirds!
Arnav and Khushi smile….

Khushi:-you’re right! We are coming!
Arnav:-yes! You go, people and we will follow you!
They went inside…all happy and dancing…
But Arshi couldn’t join them yet…

They can’t stop dancing that love dance…swinging with the piano melody…a melody which seems created only for them…in that poolside…under the light of the moon, the light of their smiles and loving eyes…



END
waiting for your comments
love you all... 
PS: I want to thank especially: Ruki ;), naughty rain ;), Mrs Raizada (Laxallovearshi), the famous Jyo.Arshi.IPK, the little jenji08 (and her mum ;))....and all my friends

       

52 comments:

  1. Beautiful and romantic ending to a beautiful FF

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    1. thanks my dear, you're a sweetheart :*

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  2. tears on my eyes soo romantic.you know what i can't concentrate at reading cause of the front picture of our hoties.sexy, handsome and naugty arnav.and our princess khushi.plz crazy girl can put a new ff like this ful of romance and love.

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    1. my god dear Najat...you're a romantic person that's why you get affected :*
      yes I will try maybe to write another FF...
      thank you so much

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  3. WOW..... what to say..... speechless......
    main bas kho gai thi...... how can u write soooo amazingly........!!!!!!

    May Allah bless u always..... :)


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    1. dear Mamia...
      I don't know what to said...
      thank you dear thank you so much ;)

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  4. loved it you made us into emotional fools this idiot cousin of mines is crying over my shoulder loved the ending so cute and sweet and yes a really tear jerk awesome ending baby on the way love them dancing to the end beautiful thanks for the pm and a rocking ff ( she was crying also )

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    1. :DDDD I can imagine you reading and your cousin crying over your shoulder :DDDD
      thank you Dumas...
      thank you for all your comments ;)

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  5. beautiful ending
    lovd it a lot

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  6. Awwwww how cute. Feeling bad that this FF is ending :-(( Waiting for epilouge.

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    1. thank you priyanka...
      me too I'm feeling bad for that...
      and every thing had an end ;)

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  7. This was the final part*sniff*..
    Why are you ending this ff?? I love it so much..
    Btw, the ending was beautiful.. It was romantic..
    Wow!! Khushi is pregnant!!
    Waiting for your long epilogue.. Please make it really long..
    Thanks for the pm..

    Humayra(IF)

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    1. yes promise...a so long one ;)
      thank you for loving my FF...it means so much for me
      thanks :*

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  8. SUCH A BEAUTIFULL ENDING TO A HEART TOCHING STORY LOVED IT

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    1. awwww thanks thank you arshi137 many kisses dear

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  9. i will miss this FF so much it was one of my babies too lol
    i remember how i read all the 37 chapters in one go in just a day because of how interesting it was
    loved this chapter so much ...awww khushi is pregnant so cute :)
    Arnav should be happy now all their efforts didn't go by waste.. thumbs up for the naughty couple hehehe :P
    will i ask for too much if i ask for an epilogue?...i would love to read something on khushi's pregnancy and the daddy and baby relationship...but if you can't its ok i like it in anyway its such a lovely work :*

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    1. oppss sorry i just read that you will write an epilogue and a long one lol
      i was rushing to read the chapter so didnt notice ;)

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    2. you're so sweet considering my FF one of your babies ^^
      lol about Arnav and Khushi yes they deserve it after all what they did together :p
      thank you dear for your cute lovely comment
      :*

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  10. hey cant belive is the end of this ff but love the ending love how he proposed to her
    perfect ending beatifully written awesome writer
    looking forward to the epilogue cant wait
    update soon
    thanks for the pm

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    1. thank you dear Nadia...you're so lovely!
      happy you love it...
      thank you again

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  11. love the ending

    india094-if

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  12. SUPERB................
    THE FULL STORY WAS EXCELLENT..................

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    1. thank you dear but you forget to put your name

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  13. Amazing update loved the ending aww she is pregnant, and he gave her a romantic engagement and the wedding she had wanted. Loved it wow did you play the piano that was too good. Thank you for giving us this story Are you going to write season 2 for this story???? Thanks for the pm.

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    1. Thank you Paramjit! :* for always commenting!
      no the one who's playing the piano is not me
      hope I can do like her :p
      I don't know what I will do next

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  14. awesome end...
    with a good news and their marriage :D...
    and i want an epilouge plzz like 3pairs holding their
    tht will be superb i think kst an idea thts all..
    thnx 4 pm :D

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  15. beautiful ending to the ff.loved it........
    lakshyaNkt

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  16. Really sad that it's ending but loved it and can't wait for the epilogue

    - surita12

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  17. Such a wonderful ending ! Will be missing this FF


    Laxshalovearshi

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  18. amazing updt

    luv it

    summaiyasayed

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  19. beautiful ending
    drunkiiebabe

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  20. Awwww such a Sweeet update Arnav is such a sweetheart

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  21. super duper ending and such a romantic one...loved it very much....will miss this ff

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  22. First of all, I am sooooooooo sorry for such a late reply...sorry sorry sorry

    Okay now back to what I want to say, What da!!!!! An unannounced ending??? Why god why?? But if I be truthful, this is the perfect ending and I was just being selfish :p awesome ...I mean this is what one can say perfect finishing...I loved loved loved loved it sooooooooooooooo much.......will remember this ff forever...for a lot of reasons...

    Thank you Crazy for giving us such a beautiful story..I hope you'll update unfaithful and my girl more often now ;)

    A big bear hug to you

    Yours

    Naughty rain :)

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    1. And I demand the epilogue ASAP lol, I don't know how I will cope...forced marriage was sooo close to my heart!!!

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  23. awesome ending......

    loved it.

    thanks for the pm in IF ...... pavi1

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  24. dear u end it soon......as i'm following this ff from part 40...but i've read all 39 parts before tht in one go........
    it was really beautiful ending.......
    arnav totally surprised khushi.....
    khushi was worried y he took off the ring...
    thn their announcement n engagement too lovely...
    khushi missed her periods so she is already pregnant....
    arnav so happy....
    loved their kiss and dance......
    anjali n aman also happy.......
    n yes nw eagerly waiting fr epilogue.....
    - Akorshi -

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  25. Beautiful update !!!! romantic ending ...
    pinky89

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  26. sorry for late comm ... Was Amazing update // im really gone miss this FF .. i wish if u could give u some EPILOGUE ..we need some HOT last MOMENT :D but any way UR the BEST gone miss this FF badly ..:D

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  27. Amazing ending awesome story well written ff we want forced marriage season 2 please please please

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    1. sorry I forget to write my IF name [ASR6262]

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    2. beautiful story happy ending
      waiting for epilogue looking forward another beautiful FF with arhi
      thanx for pm

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  28. beautiful end dear :)

    mandy 15 :)

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  29. it was amazing........ just luvd it...

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  30. Superb ending... Luvd it

    Deep5128 (IF)

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  31. thanks...amazing
    ~udaymanyata07~

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  32. Awesome truesome, amazing and really loved this ff, started as forced marriage and end with loved :)

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