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Thursday 6 December 2012

For my angel (new SS) chap 1



For my angel…

New SS…
Sorry, no more FF…it takes so much chapters and you need to create so much drama…so, I don’t know…this is not a real short story…it’s a story…hope you enjoy!
Hi, my dear friends…
Ok…
If my FF is ending, then…
I’m here to present for you a new work…
I hope…
Hope and wish…
It will please you….
It’s different ok?
Don’t be disappointed…
Well…I hope you will not be disappointed…
I don’t know…
I’m giving you the start and then…you tell me…
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Chapter 1: birthday???!
RM/ early in the morning: Arnav bedroom:
He  still in the bed…he has slept difficultly last night and he needs more time to wake up…more hours to sleep…but the office has no pity…he should attend many meetings…he has fulfill his day to keep his self busy all the day…
He was alone in the enormous but empty bed…laying in one side…
Arnav Singh Raizada…
He has it all…
Money!
Fame!
Handsomeness!
Magnificence!
Smartness!
Success!
He has it all but…happiness!
After he lost her suddenly…
The death of his wife was like a storm taking away his happiness for ever…
He lost that joy making the life easier…he is a different man, by now…totally different…he doesn’t even recognize himself, sometimes…
 He was living in heaven…but death, with no pity…has taken the source of his happiness…his Lewis…
He missed her…
Especially today…
Her green eyes staring at him calmly: ‘’coffee?’’…every morning…she gave him love, courage, hope…
Their first meeting was in UK…
He was then student and she was also student in the same university…
She made the first step and invited him for a coffee…
He accepts and it was the fairytale…
They can’t separate from that moment…
When he get certificated and wanted to come back to India…
Without hesitation…she follows him…
He loved her and she was ready to leave her country to be only with him…
He proposed and she said ‘’yes’’…
His family refused that union at first, they are planning his marriage with an Indian girl…thinking that his marriage with a stranger girl who doesn’t understand their traditions and religion will certainly fail…
They judger that she will never be able to live with them peacefully but Lewis proved the opposite…yes, she never succeed to wear a saree properly or to cook perfectly but she succeed wining their love…she had that smile and her funny talks when she speaks Hindi with her accent…she makes it all funny…and Nani, Anjeli, mama, mami and Akash accepts her like a daughter in law of the family…
But the fairytale ended…
It ended since four years…
Yes exactly four years back…
During those four years, he was living without her…his wife…without her funny talks, imperfect Hindi, without her love…
4 years…
Like today …1st December….he has lost her…she’s gone forever…
Her death was like his end…the end of his happiness…
He wanted to follow her…he wished he can…he was a weak man without her love and he felt empty…but he can’t…he can’t just renounce on the life like her…he just can’t because when she left, she gives him one last gift…
She gives him a reason to live…
She gives him…his every thing…his…
Suddenly, the door of his room gets opened…
And a little cute girl runs to the bed…
Jumping twice on the bed and then jumped in the arms of Arnav who received her with a smile…a big smile:
-Papaa…
She giggled…
-Good morning my paa!
-good morning my angel!
-Paa…yethterday my mith told me that I’m doing well!
Arnav retains his lauth…she’s cute and she lost her tooth…that’s way all the ‘’s’’…she can’t only pronounce them ‘’th’’ and with her cute voice…he was just amused…
She smiles innocently while laying on his chest, proud her miss in school told her this…
Her papaa kissed her forehead tightly…
-really? What did she said, your miss?
-she thaid I’m thmart!
-of course you’re smart! She just noticed that now?....you’re already smart before she said all this!  She’s late!
Lily looks at his papaa with two wide green eyes…she understands her papaa was attaching her miss…But she loved her Miss too much…too too much…
-yeth but my mith thaid always that!
-oh!? really?
-yeah!
She nodded with her little head, still looking at her paa…
Lily:-you know…everyone has his birthday....
Arnav’s mood, suddenly, transformed, his smile vanished…
Lily:-you know what means birthday?
Arnav keeps silent looking at his little angel, she grows up, she talking now, she’s asking, she’s thinking…she’s no more a baby…she does understand everything…his eyes getting wet seeing her…
Lily:-it means one day…you born…and you keep thelebrating that day all your life…you buy cake also…cake…cake, candles and lots of gifts…
Arnav suddenly gets irritated…
Ar:-who told you all that?
-My mith! (my Miss!) and she told me today is my birthday…mine!
-damn it! (Arnav whispered)
He gets up, frustrated…Lily in his arms…
He was angry…he was fire…
He calls his di, loudly…
Anjeli comes:
-Chote?...Lily…wake up already baby?....what happen chote, why you’re…???
-make her ready for the kindergarten! Today it’s me who will take her there!
-but…the bus?...
Angry, Arnav was closing the door of his room…
Leaving Anjeli and Lily opened mouth…
Anjeli knows what’s happening in the mood of his brother…
Today wasn’t like all the days…
Today is the first December…the day when Lily is born and when also Lewis is dead…Anjeli always wished she can celebrate Lily’s birthday but she can’t for her brother and for the memory of his brother’s wife...
During three years…no birthday celebrating for anyone…it’s Arnav order to that his Lily never had to ask him for her birthday…
That was clear and final…
But today Lily knows what it means a birthday…
She knows…
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Khushi wears her white salwar Kmeez after taking her bath…
She does her poja…
She ordered her bed…
She puts many colored files and colored papers...so many colored pens and stickers and stuffs like that…she putted all in a bug…
She smiles…
She looks at the watch…
She screams: ‘’Devi Maya…I’m late….!’’
She runs…runs…with her bug…she finds on her way a plate of jalebi…she takes two and bits on a piece while still walking so fast to the main door to get out…when she heard:
-Arrrrriiii Sanka Devi! Stop right where you are! No other move!
Khushi whispered ‘’not again’’…she’s late!
-B…BBBuaji?
-yes! BBBBB…buaji!...hai nandikishore…what are you thinking you’re doing? Going without tell me: what are you thinking about Abhijat? Ha???  Don’t be shy! Talk!
-shy?...why should I be shy! Of course I will not marry someone like him! Ever, never in my life…
-what?? Come here tell me! Why heee Khushi! Khushi!
Khushi escapes from her buaji…she’s now on the road…
-I’m late Buaji…I love you…he smells the onion…Buaji, that’s why!
She yelled at her buaji while smiling and telling her bye…
Buaji getting angry…:
-you…if I catch you…
Khushi keeps smiling…
On her way to the bus station to go to her job…she knows Buaji will make her marry soon someone…Buaji doesn’t want to die, letting Khushi all alone without anyone to be with her and protect her…
Buaji is getting old and she’s sick…and she will not accept to her orphaned beautiful girl to stay without anyone if something bad happened to her…
But Khushi refused to marry that way…she wants a magical love wedding…but where’s that prince charming…she doesn’t know…
Khushi takes the bus…fortunately; she has this job…the job of her dreams…if she hasn’t the man of her dream…at least she gets the job of her dream…
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In other hand…Arnav puts Lily in the car…in the behind side…putting the seat belt for her…
He sits and drive himself to the kindergarten…
He so want to meet that Miss to make her learn how to speak with kids…
Why she’s talking with them about birthdays…birthday is personal…she has  nothing to do with that…
Nothing…
He goanna make her learn to respect this!
Because he can’t celebrate in a day like this…he just can’t…even the idea of being happy in such day…makes him suffer…
To be continued…
So…tell me…
feed back...
you want me to continue or no...

26 comments:

  1. so arnav wife is dead and khushi is his daughter teacher his wife died in childbirth that why he does not celebrate his daughter birthday which is so wrong making the child pay for something which is not her fault awesome start thanks for the pm

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  2. WOW was such amazing start .. totally different ..waiting to read more how there love story gone start

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  3. Amazing story very interesting cant wait to read more continue soon please and thank u for pm me
    loved your blogger wallpaper ;)
    [ASR6262]

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  4. wow amazing start
    cant wait to read more
    drunkiiebabe

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  5. Very nice storyline..nice star.....pls update soon

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  6. wow angel lovely start.. Khushi is Lily's miss
    waiting 4 next part
    thanks 4 pm

    jenji08

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  7. wow nice concept..
    arnav ur doing wrong u have celebrte her bday she is jst little gal ryt..
    thnx 4 pm :D

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  8. Great concept...
    Arnav's wife , Lewis died after giving birth to thir daughter , Lily...
    Lily is so cute..
    Khushi is Lily's teacher..
    Looks like a fight is coming up..
    Continue soon and thanks for the pm..

    Humayra(IF)

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  9. mandy 15 :)

    awesome start dear :)

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  10. Yes please continue... it is great! Eroni

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  11. Wow nice story
    super start..
    continue soon
    rkapoor1382

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  12. nice drama story .....different but very interesting continue plz ......

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  13. nice starting......
    yes its different........
    so teacher n dad ki beech love hogy.......
    lily wil be the reason of their love.....
    continue......
    - Akorshi -

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  14. Arnav wife is dead khushi is te teacher !! So Arhi 1st meet ..Interesting ..continue soon
    pinky89

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  15. great start update soon
    kushigowda

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  17. dont even ask if you will continue or not ...of course YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE after giving us this amazing prologue ;)
    khushi is the teacher i hope and did i mention Lily is so cute i didn't see her of course but her behavior says it all
    i hope khushi meets her prince charming in the next chapter ! XD

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  18. superb updt

    luv it

    updt soon

    summaiyasayed

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  19. awesome start.......
    thanks for the pm in IF...pavi1

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  20. nice start...at first i was shocked...i was thinking that khushi is dead!!but thank god its arnavs' 1st wife....not khushi!!

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  21. Hmmm.... interesting!!!!! Though I can't digest the fact that arnav has loved someone apart from khushi...it will take me sometime to get used to it....but I am waiting to see how arnav and khushi falls in love in this case scenario....waiting for next part :)

    Dushturain

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  22. Awesome start continue soon

    Deep5128 (if)

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  23. fabulous start. loved it
    thnx
    lakshyaNkt

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  24. sound very interesting !!continue soon

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