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Sunday 3 March 2013

Sin N°1: Gluttony...




The 7 Sins of Love...

see the Introduction: Link: 7 sins of Love




Sin N°1:

Gluttony...





-I’m hungry !

-now ?

-yeah now!

-but…I’m late! You know that I’m goanna to visit amma today!

-yeah, but first you goanna cook lunch for your husband!

Khushi looks at him…giving him an angry gaze and then went to the kitchen…

She was about to go…she was all ready…she was wearing her saree…

And just ready to go and visit her amma…

She tucked the corner of her pallu in her petticoat…

She took a hair clip, attaching her hair, nervously…

Took off the vegetables nervously, throwing them on the kitchen table….

She stopped…she takes a deep breath…all bored that she goanna cook while she wants to go to her amma…

Being newly wedded with that spoiled husband isn’t an easy job…

It’s a full time job..

Here he comes…all proud that he’s making her cook like a servant…

Yes, they got servants…but this man wanted only the food she makes with her own hands…he never eat from others than his nani, his di and now his wife…

Igghhh…she just hates that!

She is cutting the vegetables like she was taking revenge of him…

Tak tak tak…

The knife was suffering in her hand…

The tomatoes she’s cutting are now tomatoes juice…

He comes near her…

He catches some cheese from there…

He smirked at her…

Looking amused…

-what’s that?

-a salad!

-leave it!

She looks at him…

-I said I’m hungry… you prepare salad? Really? I want something heavy! Something delecious! Salad is an entry…

She looks at him…breathing difficultly because she goanna kill him right now if he doesn’t stop…

-I want a dessert too! Make some kheer!...I’m going to change!

She breaths deeply…

-Arnav Singh Raizada!

*****

After 60 minutes…

All was ready and perfectly putted on the dining table…

Arnav was eating the rice and chicken she made with appetite…

He commands to that she sits there and have dinner with him…

-No use to go! It’s already 7 pm…stay! You will go tomorrow!

-you’re too much!

She pouted and turned other side…

When he ignores her…she looks at him and see that he was eating the Kheer…all lost in it…

Angry, she stands up:

-you’re a selfish man! I don’t know how you don’t have a big tummy! You should be a fat, mean man! You love foods that much? You don’t see that I’m all sad that I’m still cooking for you while all what you do is ordering me what I should do and what I shouldn’t!!!!

With that she left the dining room to the living room and sits there all fumed…

She crossed her hands…all nervously…

He finally comes to her…

Smirking…
Taking the kheer bowl in his hand…

He approaches from her…

He sits on the table in front of her…


He takes a spoon all full of kheer and he places it in front of her mouth…

The smell of it…

One look on it…

And she felt her watery mouth and her empty stomach inciting her to open her mouth…

His eyes were amused but she doesn’t care now…

She knows that it’s just so delicious and so yummy and so soft…

She wanted to tell him that he’s mean before she eats…

She opens her mouth…

And before she could speak….the spoon full of kheer stops her…

And the hot sweetness of the creamy recipe enters softly her mouth…

He’s satisfied…

She has it…

Some kheer stuck in the corner of her mouth…

He wipes it with his thumb and then he sucks it from his finger…

He took another spoon and feed her, smirking…

He made her feed him…

She doesn’t want to…but she does it…
 

They finish all of that feeding each other…

She wanted to get up…

But he stops her…

-you understand now how much all what you cook is just delicious?

She looks at him…

-you understand that I’m not just hungry but I want to eat what you prepare for me, not any other food but yours…because I’m getting used only to it now…that kheer is my drug and when you feed me with those hands…

He takes her hands in his…and poses pecks in itch finger… on the left palm and then in the right palm…on both her wrists…

She’s melting like butter in the stove… :p

-Arnav…

-baby!...

-I love you!

-I love you more!
 Note: I know it's short ^^
But funny...
and to read another sin...I want just your comment...

23 comments:

  1. Aww Arnav love her so much that he don't want her to live for sometimes.
    It was a cute os

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  2. ooh great conceptt
    adorable updatee,,he doesnt even want to let her go
    and love her foods that much
    yu should continuee=]

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  3. wooww that was so cute
    these two are so funny
    waiting for the next part :)

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  4. Loved d os
    enjoyed reading it
    Thanx for pm
    --MISHTEE--

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  5. wow beautiful lovely update......
    loved both Arnav and Khushi.. especially he feeds her gheer.......

    from jenji08

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  6. I love to read os..
    I liked the the 7 sins concept and obviously the first shot too..
    Post the second os soon and thanks for the pm..

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  7. Loved it that was so cute just so she will stay awesome start well do

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  8. really cuteeeeeeee....... loved it..... :))
    i loved the way u present this OS with pics..... it looks really beautiful :)

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  9. interesting but very short update, i want long update

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  10. Wow........that was Amazing.
    Arnav love her so so much that Y he don't Want her to live for sometime.

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  11. short but cute update . will be waiting for next dear ;)

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  12. ohhhh it was cute
    a lovely husband n a funny wife with their gluttony
    i loved it
    want to read more

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  13. a lovely and cutie first scene
    kep doing for the other sin

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  14. ha ha arnav is sooo cute;)

    kushigowda

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  15. wow! so so lovely.......
    loved it....

    - Akorshi -

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  16. visited your blog after so long. have so much catching up to do. really excited with the prospect of so many updates waiting to be read :)
    this os the first thing i read. oh so sweet, kheer being his drug. this kind of all consuming love is so special :). cant wait to read abt the next sin.

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  17. short but cute

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  18. Hi im Aruna.. You might be wondering who the heck am i because i just started to comment.. Oh you know about how i told u i can't see because the text matches with background.. I will explained to u what imean by that. I read updates in my phone, when im reading in phone the background of it becomes arnav's picture and you know like black colors on tge picture makes it hard to read.. This problem is only when u read in phones but not in computer.. Sorry for disturbence.. Ii enjoyed the update thank you..

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  19. Bhahaha...Arnav is so cute...

    Amazing OS...Can't wait to read more :)

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