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Monday 11 March 2013

for my angel chapter 25

For my angel: Chapter 25:

Note: I will update after 35 comments...I'm not at all greedy, asking for this...it's because I think my update deserve that...(my other sin: Pride) :p....No...but, I'm giving to this story a lot of love...I deserve the same from you...I think so...I don't force anyone to comment...Please be free...


Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam doon?



Arnav looks at Khushi with wide eyes…
All wet…
He passes his hand on his hair, he looks down at his clothes…he looks down at Lily all wet and giggling…at Khushi all wet and shivering from little coldness and lot of fear…
He retains a smile…
He couldn’t anymore retain it…
He just…giggled…taking all the stress out…
Khushi was admiring how much he’s adorable while laughing…
He’s even more handsome…
Khushi smiles finally seeing his mood changed…
The hose falls off in between her hands…
She’s for the first time seeing him like that…
She’s all mesmerized even when he stops laughing…
Arnav took the hose…wanting to take his revenge…
Lily:-oh no….Paa…
She said running away…Sushi barking following her…all around…
Khushi also wanted to run away but it was too late…
First, he catches her from behind…shower her with the water, all amused…
-Paa leave maa…na…
Lily pleaded…
So, he pointed the water on Lily too…she giggled running away, again…
Trapped….Khushi is totally in his arms and couldn’t move…
Feeling the wetness and warmness same time…warmness of his chest against her back…
With one hand encircling her waist…he’s almost lifting her by one…he’s walking and trying to shower Lily same way…
She’s feeling his breath in her nape…
-Arnavji!
She difficultly called him…pushing away his hand on her tummy and waist…
-shhh…look!
He drops the hose of water from his hand to point at the sky, showing her…
The color of the sky announcing the twilight…was so beautiful…
Incredibly beautiful…
The light of the sun seems insisting to stay for some other minutes…
The sun is now perfectly orange…
The sky had all the degrees of orange colors, little of purple, little of yellow…
Khushi smiles seeing it…
He can side way see her smile…and then looks at the sky…he smiles too looking at it…
It was really beautiful…
The farmhouse was so near of the nature with all her beauties…
They admire it when they feel anew the water on them…
Both look surprised at Lily giving them a shower….it was her turn to take revenge…
Arnav hugs khushi the more…pressing her on him…hiding his face on her nape…while khushi hides her face with her hands...
-oh no…lily…No…
Khushi giggled…
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Water game and twilight…
Was perfect moment ever…
the three of them lived…
Even poor Sushi who is barking when they all enter…leaving him in the kitchen alone, closing the door behind…
He was all wet so Arnav refuses to that he enter also the bathroom and the room with them…
Khushi puts Lily in the bathtub full of warm water…
She starts bathing her while she still all wet…shivering…
Arnav was there…
-the other room has a shower too…you go, I will take care of Lily!
He said to her…
Because she was feeling cold and needed some warm water, she nodded and leave Lily…
Arnav looks at Lily enjoying swimming in the tub…playing with water…
Ar:-you like to stay here for a little?
Lily nodded…she can’t have enough of water…
-ok, stay here a little, I will go and look for a towel for you, you stay good girl, ok?
-ok!
Arnav looks at the towels which are on a closet in the guest's room…he thought that khushi may forget to take one as the towels were there untouchable…
He just go other room…he knocked and when there is no reply, he enters…
He knocked again at the bathroom door…
No sound of water in the shower…
A:-you need a towel…I thought…I bring that to you…
Khushi fighting with the zip of her petticoat…placed on the back…the blouse and the petticoat refused to be taking off as they are all wet…stuck to her body…and her fingers are hurt from the morning, it was difficult for her…
k:-ohh…great…
She said…
A:-any problem?
-no!
She shouted nervously…
-ouch…
She hurts herself by the zip which being so close to her skin and forced by her to be opened…
Hearing that…he tries opening then the door, Khushi forgets to lock…she thought she locked it…but here he’s inside…
Looking at her…
With only a petticoat and a blouse…she felt all shy…
-you?
she hides herself immediately with her hands…trying to hide her bare waist…
But he walks towards her…
Nervously, she walked back…turned other side…
He’s now facing her milky back only…
He could see a red trace in the level of the zip…before she makes her long hair hide from him all her back, hiding also the zip…
A:-you want to take it off?
K:-no!
She said firmly…
K:-it’s ok, you can go!
She said with a weak voice…she knows he will not leave that easily…
A:-you can't take a shower with your clothes on!
He said walking towards her…
Touching her hair to put it on one side of her shoulder…
-no!
She turns fast to face him…
He was so close…
When she turns his eyes fall on her cleavage…
She saw it and turns again to her position…
A:-let me help you!...Don't worry!
He ordered…
This time he firmly puts away her long hair…
He’s feeling she stopped breathing when his warm hand touched the end of her back…on the level of the zip of her petticoat…but he just unzipped it, difficultly…then, she felt that his hand leave it…but again his fingers come back to rub the red trace, caused by her when she tried to take it off…
His fingers caress her back…from there to the dori of the blouse…that he untied…
She felt a weakness in her knees…closing her eyes…
But it wasn’t enough…
He has to catch her, holding her by waist…because when she felt his lips on her back…she was about to go away from him…
He firmly holds her to him…he makes her turn to face him…
Little forcefully, he pulled her chin up to him…
Still holding her chin…he waits for her to look at him…
Once he could see the same feeling he has in her eyes…
He places his hand on the back of her head…to pull her face closer…
Khushi was feeling all weak…her hands clutch his wet shirt…
She’s wide awake…that her first kiss goanna happen that second…when she felt his lips on her lips…
For the first time of her life…she’s been that close to a person…
For the first time she’s feeling high…
Closing her eyes, losing her mind…
Unconsciously, her lips were parted like to welcome him…
She felt so warm…even if she’s almost naked…
But she couldn’t do anything much…
Despite his desires, Arnav was the nicest possible…all his moves were gentle…he kissed her slowly, surely, firmly…like those rosy lips were so much vulnerable…he explored them, taking all his time…feeling them with his lips…when he felt them parted for him…he introduced his tongue…sweet…she’s tasting so sweet, the way he imagined…
He so wants to that kiss to last...but he knows she’s all nervous…she doesn’t kiss him back…he knows she’s so much confused to react, because she was only closing her eyes…the important was that he’s feeling that she’s all ok with it…seeing the way she’s arching her body towards him…clutching his shirt tight…
But he felt a salty liquid mixed to the sweetness of her mouth…
Tears…
Her tears??
He opens his eyes…
Suddenly and sadly, he pulled back…
To see tears are dropping from her eyes…Arnav was surprised…he doesn’t have the intention to hurt her damn it…
-I…did I hurt…
She nodded negatively…
-N...I’m fine!
She whispered…
He knows she wanted to stay alone now…
-ok…now…you will catch cold…just take a warm bath, ok?
She nodded…looking down…
 he just walks away from there…licking his lips, don't believing that he just…just kiss her!...but that he hasn't enough,yet...
Seeing the towel…he wanted to come in again…but he just put it near the door and went away…
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Was it a huge mistake to kiss her?
No, it wasn’t!
He wants it!
She wants it!
Then why to cry???
Of course she is mad at him…
Arnav was trying to dry Lily’s hair with towel, thinking about it…when he heard her calling him…
She’s calling him…”Arnavji”??????
He makes lily put another towel on to get warm:
-will come back, baby…
Lily just nodded…she’s happiest child ever…
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He comes to her in the other bathroom…
-khushi?
From the door lightly opened, he could see her beautiful face…
K:-I need…
She said shyly…
K:-my clothes...please!
She continued hesitantly…
If her eyes are avoiding looking at him, 
now, they maybe could hide the truth…but her face and expressions couldn’t hide it…
She wanted that kiss too…he’s sure, she's not mad!…if so, why she doesn’t try to push him once, when he was kissing her so slowly, ready any moment to her “push-away” gesture…and why she’s now so confident with his presence around…
-Arnavji…
She whispered again seeing he doesn’t reply…
-ok!
He nodded…he wanted her to trust him…that’s what he wants, now…after that kiss…he doesn’t know why…but…he wanted it!
Opening the closet where all their clothes bought by Aman and sent by his sister are there…he finds her nighty white outfit with the dupatta…but then remember!…she will need…that…he looks at them…he finds them hidden on a corner hidden by another saree…
White ones and pink ones…
white or pink?
He smiles…he has to touch her bra now??...her panties…
He felt like he’s doing what a husband did…and…no!…no guilt or hesitation in that at all…in the contrary…it felt so right…he picked the white ones…hiding them in the palm of his hand…
He comes back to her…knocked the door…
He will believe that he’s a saint or a homosexual if he would just give her those clothes like that, from the door...without teasing or looking...
But he did…he’s also proud of himself…he wanted her trust…here he’s!
Still when she takes the outfit…she doesn’t say anything…
A:-you don’t need anything else?
K:-yes…oh…no!...thank you!
-I’m sure, yes, take it!
He tends his hand holding her underwear…
She takes it and closes the door, so fast, breathing heavily…
All that was happening first time with her…how it is possible…all that…???
She has no control on her heart anymore…
And she wanted to laugh, same time to cry…
His touch…his lips…his hands…fingers…
His kiss…
First on her back…
And second, on her lips…she washed her face again…her face was burning form shyness and multitude of feelings…
On the other hand…Arnav was all the way thinking…
How it felt heaven…to touch her, to kiss her…but also he was thinking at the progress of their relation now...
He’s like trusting her, also…feeling that he has to open his heart for her, that it felt good when he just listen to his heart…that she’s the one deserving his care and his feelings…
Those feelings he couldn’t give a name, yet…
can he name this "Love"?

50 comments:

  1. Hiii I m the first hay iss payar ko kya naam doon first kiss soo romentic

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  2. wow this is sooo lovely update....
    waiting for the next part yaar

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  3. superb dear superb
    i'm spechless to write anth
    first how beautifully u write the garden shower it was like i was there to watch them
    and then the waited kiss........hats off to u
    the way u show the gantellness of arnav n then his try to get her trust make a super natural sense
    and then the question in his mind ...ohhh great .........super impact of ipkknd
    last but not the list u deserve all the love from us <3<3<3 yes yes i mean it damn it
    thank u for the banner on the begining u use
    love u hamesha
    ur little lopa
    :*************

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  4. aww amaaazing!!
    love the water fight and twilight=]
    and aww their first kiss=]

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  5. SUPER DUPER Amazing update ...loved there kiss was HOT .. and end was soo romantic ..cant wait for next to read hoe he gone win her trust and more her love

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  6. woooooooowwwwwww awsam superb i love itttttttttttt finally their first kiss i think i waited 4 it more than them loool

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  7. I like how hes trying to build a foundation for a good relationship- not just jumping from one physical thing to the next. Khushi and Arnav have to spend the rest of there lives together, if the mess things up now, it'll turn into a sore spot for the rest of their lives.

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  8. Awesome update
    Beautiful, Love it

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  9. Amazing update.
    I loved their first kiss after the awesome water fight.
    It was so sweet of Arnav to give Khushi her clothes without staring at her.
    He wants Khushi to trust him.
    Lily is adorable as always.
    Looking forward to the next update.
    Thanks.

    Zafi

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  10. wowwwwwwwww their first kiss....... superb....... i loved it.......
    very lovely update....

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  11. atlast......they kissed!!!!!.....LOVED IT......IT'S AWESOME.....

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  12. Fibally love is in the air :*

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  13. bach briti nebda ya majnouna arshian....hhhhh t'as compris ce que j'ai dit
    realy you describe every etape in such an amazing way
    first how he lokks at her all wet and caress his hearand looks at himslef , then looks at little lily then at her again vraiment j'ai imaginée la scene comme je suis dedons .....taking her by waist like he carrye her
    aw the twilight so romantic.
    second the naughty lilte her turn to wet both of them...he hide in khushi nape and her hide her face by hands.... so cute.
    and the most wonderful part mmm the bathroom NO COMMENT
    first trust and then kiss to make and grand etape for love
    now elle a le courage de l'appeler et demander her clothes
    my crazy girl conituée comme ça tous slowwly take your time to describe everything btw them i'm not hurry to finish this FF.
    gros biz

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  14. amazing update... loved there first kiss and arnav showing his concern and love :)

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  15. Wow!!! Amazing update.. I loved it.. Thank you... Plz next part soon.. Im dying here to read next part.. Poz plz

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  16. yaaaa finally they kissed!!!!
    i hope they can evaluate their feelings soon.

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  17. Waiting for the update dear

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  19. i can't get enough of this chapter i keep on reading it again and again ... i am dying to read the next part i am so exited

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  20. wow! awesome........
    finally they kissed.....
    arnav kissed on her back......
    thn lips....lovely..
    khushi is happy......
    i hope arnav soon realize he loves khushi.....
    aww arnav giving khushi's inner wear wid clothes...
    as cute husband........
    update soon.....
    - Akorshi -

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  21. OMG Finally they KISSED ! Another OMG hE started to progree their relationship and the word "love" came to his mind which is really good sign ! LOVED IT !

    Laxshalovearshi

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  22. hey mind blowing update
    yayyyyyy they finallllly kissed soooo happpy
    love love water wetting scene sooo romantic and very very cute
    lily awesome as per usual
    amazing ending love how hes confused if he loves her or not
    superb writing
    cant wait for the next update
    plz plz update soon

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  23. omg this is getting exciting
    they KISSED !!!!! wooww ok no HE KISSED loll ..i wish she responded but at least she didnt push him back
    am so happy
    the was so hot ..in the bathroom ..woah my lappy is suffering from high temperature
    please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please to infinity...
    UPDATE SOON! here is a peck from me too :*

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  24. Awesome update loved it that was so cute loving the naughty asr loved the kiss and having to choose her clothes loved how he was thinking about the kiss loved the update thanks for the pm

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  25. beautiful !!!!!!!!!SUPERB love it !!!!! Arnav is so wahouuu love this story , continue soon cant wait for the next chapter

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  26. amazing update
    loved it
    loved the kiss
    continue soon
    thanks for the pm
    drunkiiebabe

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  27. amaazing updatee
    hope he will realise his feelings

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  28. so romantic and hot happening update
    lakshyaNkt

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  29. wow nyc update dere relation is improvin day by day dats realllie good....

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  30. I read it again.
    It is a fantabulous update.
    Now please update the next one thanks.
    This is your 35th comment.

    Zafi

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  31. Superb update..
    Finally the first kiss..

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  32. superb updt

    luvd it

    summaiyasayed

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  33. Awesome update loved it
    Finally they kissed Arnav and khushi's first kiss
    I'm so excited for next part continue soon please and thank u for pm me :)

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  34. Its me melihoney dear. Awww finally they kisssed and thanks dear for this beautiful kiss. Now its party time, gosh loved the update and their first kiss.

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  35. assmmmee parrttt..!! ive been readng ur parts in fb..!!! n cant make myself wait more.. i serched in google...!! :D n ive got tis sitee..! n was lykk 25 CHHAAPPPPPSSS UPPDDAAATTEEDD.. n i read all in one gooo..... belive me u r an aassmmee wriitteerr..!!! ;) nnneexxtt paartt ASAP pllleaahh..!!! n well... can i know.. how do i know wen u update a new ppaarrt?? is der nyoder way oder den chkng it regularly?? :) Hope u/anyone reply.. :)

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  36. thats was a beautiful update..finally arnav kissed her...wow.. no doubt he will be a cute and naughty husband...he should start with friendship...waiting for next...

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  37. wonderful update.....
    loved cute lily....
    now she fels confident that may be he also likes her...???
    she is not sure of her feelings towards him but yet she feels happy seeing his care, concern and love....
    loved the update very much

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  38. beautiful update. loved it . continue soon ..waiting ...

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  39. Amazing update.
    The water game was beautiful. Khushi admiring smiling arnav. Wow, their first kiss. But wat made her cry. So he s all set to win her trust. He doubts whether its love, nice progress. Pls continue soon

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  40. arshi first kiss....wow n arnav giving khushi her clothes...n realizing his feelings wow nice update


    kushigowda(IF)

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  41. amazingly assmmmmeeee update..!!
    nnneexxttt ppaaarrtt ssuupppaaa ssuupppaaa ASAP ppllllzzzzzzjjjjj..!!!!

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  42. love it

    and sorry for the late comment

    india094-if

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  43. First of all sorry for d late comment the comment box did not appear to comment
    lovely update so finally their lips met n she was admiring him hope arnav realize his love for her soon
    tnx 4 d pm
    nishi/if

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  44. Finally they kissed thank god lily didnt interrupt them this time ..
    pinky89

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