For my angel:
chap 35:
Consummation
Without warning, you could see from the title that it will be mature!...
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Khushi looks at him…
She wanted to confess to
him also her emotions…but he just let off her shoulders and wanted to leave the
room…
she tried to hold his hand
but he was so much fast and he left their room…all angry…
she waited for
hours for him to come back…but no…he doesn’t come…
she waited for
the whole night but he doesn’t come back…
in the breakfast,
he also doesn’t come…and the whole family seems to know he was in office…for an
urgent work…since today early morning…
she called him
for the 10th time…but again it’s switched off…
in the school,
she used her power as Mrs.Raizada and took a week off…
the director
doesn’t say anything but:-o…of…course madam and it’s me who will teach your
little pupils in your absence!
-great!
But she has to
leave Lily there, in the school as she has to follow her class…and asks the
driver to drop her to Arnav’s office…
She’s full of
determination…she wants her husband!
She comes in
his office…wanting absolutely to tell him all…and also…to hug him, to kiss him
and to never let him go…
AR office:
-hello
madam…how can I help you?
-I want to
meet Arnavji!...I mean Mr. Raizada!
-do you have
any appointment?
-no…I’m…
-well you
couldn’t meet Mr. Raizada without an appointment!
-but I’m…I’m his
wife!
-huhh
The secretary
gasped…and then…stands up…
-hello Madam,
sir…is in the conference room…but the meeting has just finished…
-where is the
conference room?
-…it’s second
floor, third room to the left!...I will accompany you!
-no…it will be
ok…thank you!
Khushi smiles
to the secretary and then she walked to the conference room…
First she
hesitates…and then she knocked…but no answer…she knocked again…and when there
is no answer…she just opens the door…
-you bring the
other papers, I asked for?...and why you’re even knocking the door Aman?
Arnav was all
absorbed by his work…that he doesn’t even move his eyes from his papers…
-Arnavji…
Arnav finally
looked up at her and was damn surprised…he doesn’t imagine that she will come
till here in his office but she’s there…all beautiful and all lovely…looking at
him innocently and with a guilty expression…
He just stands
up…
-Arnavji…I’m
really sorry!...I didn’t…meant to hurt you!
Of course, he
hides his happiness…and just comes back to arrange his papers….
-I know you’re
angry!
She said
coming next to him…
-but me too…I
have something important to said!
-I’m not
really ready to listen to anything for now!...I have some work!
Arnav proud
was in!
Khushi comes
to him…holds his hand…
-please!
She said…he
couldn’t resist and he looks at her with all attention!
-talk!
-hum bhi aapse I love U damn it !!!!!!
She said
smilingly but also she has tears in her eyes…and he keeps looking at her with
surprise and then he smiles back…
-come here!
He said
amused!
And she comes
to hug him tight…and they are like that for so long when the voice of Aman
comes:
-ASR…I come
with the papers you as…oups…ASR?
Khushi wanted
to break the hug but Arnav pushed her more to him…
-Aman, get
out!
-and the
papers?
-Aman?
-but you said
it’s important!
-you’re fired!
-ok, ok,ok…I’m
sorry…sorry…sorry…
Aman just gets
out closing the door behind…
Khushi looks
at Arnav:
- that’s
embarrassing!
-it’s not!
You’re my wife and he knew…but he just wanted to tease!
Khushi just
smiles, tightening her hands around his waist…when they hug it felts too
right…just perfect…they are made for each other…
Both look at
each other…
-Now Arnavji…you
just work…I won’t stop you…I just took a lot of your office time!
-oh right?
-hmm…
-who said that
I will let off you, now?...hmm?
Without
letting off her…he took his coat, phone and car keys…
-first…are you
hungry? Cause I’m!
**************************
Taking her to
chic, calm and lovely restaurant, they both took a table…the most isolated
table…
Ordered their
lunch…and now…after eating…khushi took a dessert while Arnav just ordered some
tea…
-Arnavji just
look at this…chocolate mousse…isn’t it yummy?
-don’t
know…you feed me!
He said opening
his mouth…and without hesitation, she did…he was satisfied…and smiles to her
cuteness…she was happy with her dessert like a little kid…
He couldn’t
help but admire the way she’s eating it little by little enjoying but same
time…looking if it will end soon or no…pouting when she could see that it’s
almost completed…
But Arnavji
gestured to the witness to give another one and before she could eat the last
bit…she finds that another was waiting for her…
-Arnavji!
She said …all
happy and excited…
-you’re so
beautiful!
He said
looking at her perfect smile…and shining eyes…
-Arnavji…could
we also buy this to Lily??
-hmm…everything
you want!
Khushi just
smiles…
-khushi…for
now, I should come back to the office and you will come with me!
-ohh…no…it’s
ok…you work…I will come back home!
-I have just
to see some important files and finish something then will go to bring lily
from school…
In the car, he
couldn’t resist but peck her lips…it has so sweet taste…but she stops from doing
anything else…
***
They come back
to his office…
-sit down and
wait for me like a good girl!
He just takes
off his coat and starts reading in his
files and then starts typing in his laptop…taking some phone calls…while khushi
is also looking like this in his files too…and touching his stuffs…discovering
her husband business world…
He was deeply
reading in his files…looking even more and more handsome…while he’s
concentrated…but then also, he’s looking so mean…with other people and his
employees…he’s sometimes yelling and all nervous…his eyes are fire…
The last call
phone with one of his clients made khushi all scared…he was all nervous and he
stands up and he walking here and there in the office and then…
He suddenly
looks at her…he cuts immediately the call…
-oh my baby!
He said
looking at her…
-that was only
when I’m in work!
He said
explaining his behavior…
-khushi…am
scaring you?
He smirks
seeing her wide frightening eyes…
He just holds
her arm…making her stand up from the chair and hugs her…so tight…little
strongly…that she has to hug with same intensity…and then he just broke the hug
to see her face….God! What he goanna do with her?...how she be completely his
wife…if she is that much sensible…how could he behave in other situation…he has
always to control his behaviors with her…
**************************
So…after
dinning…putting Lily into the bed…talking a little with the family …Arnav
proposes to spend sometime in the poolside…with only her…
Like husband
wife…both are smiling to each other…having their hot tea there…
-that’s
good…(Arnav said)…night, stars, moon, you, me…isn’t it perfect…
Khushi smiles:
-I know you’re
not romantic! (she giggled) Don’t try!
-oh?! really?!...
Khushi smiles
shyly and sipped on her tea…she wanted just to tease him…
-what a
romantic man can do?
Khushi
giggled…:
-I don’t know
either…brings red flowers!
She said
guessing…she was amused…that’s why both Lily and her didn’t find any difficulty
to love each other…same cuteness and innocence…
She starts
speaking so much and he too…but he was mostly hearing while his mind was in
totally other thoughts…he does hear her but was staring at her and that doesn’t
help…she’s so beautiful…damn it! and he needs to take her away of all this
world and be with her only…even for some tims…
-khushi…let’s
change and sleep!
-yes! I speak
too much, but in phone you said that you miss the talkative me, so here I’m…
He gives her
warm smile, holds her hand…
-and I love
it! come!
****
The most
awaited moment for Arnav come…
The moment she
will come to the bed…
She comes and
lies besides him…all smilingly:
-good night
Arnavji…
Yes..that was
what he needs…to sleep…really? Is she kidding? Because he couldn’t believe…and
she’s keeping distance…and also, she turned the other side????
-good night!
He comes and
hugs her from behind….he hast to do always the first step…
-sweet dreams…
He whispered
in between her hair…
He’s feeling
her all panicked…
-you’re
feeling cold?
Without
waiting any answer…he makes her closer to him and presses his body into her…
She was all
uncomfortable and all hot…she’s feeling her cheeks burning…thanks god, all is
dark and he can’t see anything from her shyness, she wanted to break the hug,
she will die from shyness…but if she pull away…he will be hurt…so, she stays at
that position…all immobile…like a statue… but he was moving his legs and then
he just introduce his one leg in between her legs and the other one is
supporting their legs…he offers her one arm instead of the pillow and the other
one holds her waist so tight…
-very good to
sleep like that? Isn’t it?
How she could
find her voice now????
-hmm…
-you’re so
soft!...smelling also soft…fresh… so sweet…I like your hair fragrance…
He smells her
hair…on the side of her nape…tickling her by his warm breath…
-mmm…so good…
He felt her
two legs pressing on his leg like to protect herself from the emotions she’s
feeling…she felt both in danger and in heaven in his arms…
-but also I
like this outfit you wear at night…
His hand
travelled all over her salwar kameez…softly yet insisting…it tickles her and it
gives her new sensations…more than she felt when he looks straight at her eyes
or when he kissed her…
She couldn’t
anymore…and then she just turned his side to hug him and hide her face on him…
That’s it…come
on little baby to me…he thought devilishly…
He makes her
look at him pulling her up by her chin…
-what
happened?...you need to tell me something?
-Arnavji…Arnavji…I
can’t…
Arnav opens
the side bed lamp…and then looks at her…
-you
can’t?…what?
-I…mean..all
what you’re doing to me…I just can’t…handle it…
-ok…first…take
a breath to take out all this shyness!
He said
looking at her red face…
-I can’t…
She said with
a little shy smile…
-ok…I know you
can’t but I’m here to make you can!...I’m your husband khushi and you can’t be
shy from me…now…we know what is our emotions…so….
He holds her
hand and kisses it…and her hand was so cold…
-I won’t do
things you don’t really like…so…let’s sleep today, ok?
-I like …all
what you do, Arnavji…but…I mean…I’m…confused…
-I understand…
He said
hugging her…
-but didn’t it
feel good when I touch so softly??
He asked
huskily…
-hmm…
She answers
hesitantly…
-it’s good
when the person you trust and love is touching you, kissing you and more…
-more?
She asked
wanting to really know what’s this more…she felt free to ask while she’s hiding
her face on his chest…
-more means…means…when
we will make love to each other khushi!
He said it…he
needs to say it…she’s so shy…he’s really scared she will faint if he will do it
without informing her…
He’s feeling her
hiding and hiding herself more on him…and clutching the tissue of his t-shirt…
-you know what
is it?...sure, you know little about it…you heard a lot about it maybe
but…please, trust me, on that, I won’t hurt…baby…
He called by
that new name “baby”…it was just made for melting her heart…she knows what he
wants…he wants her all weak…she’s so weak and out of control already…
-look at me…
-no…
She said
against his chest…
-ok…I won’t
force you…
And then she
looked up to him…all red and sweaty because she was hiding her face on his warm
chest..he smirks looking at her and then he pulled off her hair from her
face…brushing his fingers on her forehead…
-you goanna
make…love to me, now?
She asked
innocently…he was surprised…it’s good if she starts considering this as “normal” that she’s asking him like that
about it…he smirked…
-only if you
want…
-I don’t know!
-let’s do the
first step!
-first step?
-yeah…you show
me…and I show you…for this I’m taking off my t-shirt and you do the same…
He has the
impression to be the devil taking the angel on his trap…he’s feeling she’s
hesitating but then …dear God!...she’s trying:
-I’m goanna
help you!
he did it…he’s
shirtless and she’s in her bra…it was white…all made from delicate lacy…she was
his bride…his loved wife…he loves her so much, she loves him too and…how much
he loves everything about her…all is different with her…
-you look...absolutly...beautiful!...more than beautiful...
but she doesn't say anything for a moment...
-you look...absolutly...beautiful!...more than beautiful...
but she doesn't say anything for a moment...
-khushi…look
at me too…you like me?
She nodded
positively…but she’s all confused…
-my little
baby…I think it’s enough for tonight…
Enough
torturing you…he thought…he’s not planning to make her fear him more…
-sleep like
this against me…
He takes her
in his arms and felt her peck on his neck…that was the invitation for many
other pecks…Arnav makes many butterfly’s kisses from her face to all over her
chest and she did the same for his face and shoulders but all shyly…
Arnav was just
crazy about what they are doing…because he was controlling himself all the
way…and now… his hands are touching her back…all over it…he forgets about being
all soft and pay attention...and she forgets little by little about her shyness…they
lose control…
Her moan’s
sounds filled the room and his heavy hard breath too…
And the sound
of the bed on the way of breaking down as she’s also trying to hide herself or
escape from him and he has to catch her…
They are only
in their inner clothes and khushi was only giggling for now…as he was rubbing
his stubble on her neck…
-it’s
tickling…Arn…Arnavji…
He tickles her
a long time…making her the weaker…he could smell the scent of her arousal…and
feel her hardened nipples under her bra…
He rubbed his
face on her tummy making her laugh the more…
But it wasn’t
enough for him…he pulled up her bra…revealing her breasts…she wasn’t really
happy with it…she hides immediately them with her both hands…so he kisses her
hands…
-Arn…
She’s affected
and wanted to stop him…she cupped his face…
-let me see
and kiss what is mine…khushi…please…let me…tonight…
She pulled him
to her and both shared one of the most passionate kiss they ever had…
-would
you…allow me?
He asked in
between their kiss…
-hmm…I love
you so much…and I want to be yours!
She said all
red…from both shyness and passion…
He starts
undoing her lose braid and he also kissed in her hair…and then he undressed her
totally…she was absolutely naked before him…his warm caresses covered all over
her…she clutches the bed sheets…
-that’s
perfect baby…you look…so so beautiful and…you’re sensible and responding to my
touches…look how it’s just perfect…look at me loving you!
Arnav starts
touching barely her breasts…so sensible to his touch…and khushi was only looking
at his hands doing magic…
With only his
finger tips…he starts circling her nipples…all her body is vibrating with
desire…
-you like it?
tell me! Or else I stop …
-don’t…don’t
stop…
He smiles to
her…
-don’t stop
what?
-t…touching
me…
-I won’t!
He said and he
starts kissing them softly and then he took one of them in his mouth…like a
candy….kissing, sucking, licking…making her move her body here and there…she’s
feeling wetter and wetter…and something that she needs to know…about her own
body…she needs to press her legs into each other to feel little comfortable…
She’s out of
breath…Arnav don’t want her to come now…so he stopped…she looked at him…and
then looking down…don’t know how to meet his eyes…
He spreads her
legs…she gave up totally she’s so weak to fight with her need and desire and
passion….
-you’re wet…do
you know what’s that mean?
She nodded
negatively…holding his shoulder…
-means your
body is loving all what I’m doing and he’s ready to accept me, right now but I
want to touch it first…
He said and he
touched her core softly…
-relax…breath…
She moans and
moans…she’s feeling that she’s wetting everything shamelessly…his hand…the bed
sheets…everything…
-I’m…bad…
She whispered…
-shh…
Arnva was
touching her sensible spots…he introduces one finger…and he has just to push t
inside and he’s feeling her whole being agitated between his hands…she comes
right there…moaning his name…he waited her to take back her breath…and he
continues his touch…while he comes to kiss her deeply…to ease that surprise…he
knows it’s all new and intense for her…that he was the most soft man ever…when
he was really sure that she won’t deny him…that she won’t stop him…he just pull
down his boxers….he could feel that she’s so much surprised…but her desire to
him was the victorious one in that…
Without any
word…but only touches…he makes her understand what it’s goanna happen…
All is done
slowly…Arnav was perfect even if it was difficult to hold back, he was so
soft…he gave her all the time…all the time she needs…to receive him inside
her…he kisses to ease it for her…
-that’s it
baby…I’m in..I’m totally into you…
Arnav rocked
his body but slowly…he’s in and out but trying to be as slowly as he could…his
main attention is on her…
She was
closing her eyes and holding his two arms…and biting her lower lip…
-baby it will
be easier if you look into my eyes…
Yeah…it was
easier as she comes twice when he still inside her…they talk about the pain of
the first time but she doesn’t feel any pain…she was waiting for the pain…but
no pain…her Arnavji moans her name too…he closes his eyes, he groans…she thought…he’s
feeling the same…she gave him the same pleasure, he gave her…and he just smiles
weakly to her…he kisses her forehead…he pull back…and that’s it…no pain in
it…she is in his arms now…
Arnav was
catching his breath when her sweet voice comes to him…
-Arnavji?…that’s
it?
He couldn’t
believe…she wanted more?...
He looks at
her with questioning eyes…and she blushed…
-I mean…it
doesn’t …pain…I was waiting for the pain…
-what? Baby…it
hasn’t to be painful …
He smiles…
-you love it?
It was
important for him to know…but of course she hugs him tight to hide but
conscious she was all naked and him too…she wanted to pull back…Arnav holds her
to him…not ready to let off…
-tell me …I’m
your man…tell your husband! Tell me, now!
-Arnavji…I…really…love
you!...I love all what you do to me…
She said
hugging him…
And he kissed
her forehead…again and again and again…
-how cute and
soft!...you’re so soft…
-Arnavji…and
you’re so handsome…and strong…
Arnav smiles…and
he takes her in his arms…
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Wow if you say that this is crap then we all love crap.
ReplyDeleteLoved their love making. Do continue soon nowdays you are updating after taking bit time :-(
They had a blissfull moment. I hope it will last forever. Love this honest khushi. And I really love Arnav and khushi in this ff. Do continue soon... You've done a great job.
ReplyDeleteheyyyyyyyyy AMAZZZZING update
ReplyDeletethey both finally confessed they love each other Yaaaayyyyyyyya
love the allll the scene soooo cute and very romantic
bueatifyllt written cummsumatyion scene veryyy hot hot
can't wait more the morning
plz plz update soooon
also plz update my girl sooooon
WOW......that was really...realllllly.....reallllllllllly good part.
ReplyDeletevery beautiful n very well written .
heyyyyye mai mar janwa.......arnve iz so much caring.
a super duper part.
nice update.. and really i loved your crap :) ...update it soon dear
ReplyDeletecrazy head what happend yaar,,,,,
ReplyDeletewhy are u feeling so low????????
any problem......?????
u update as always superb i love ur writing......
pm tht who needs...i don't...cz i check ur blog fr update....
so plz be yourself...write the way u always do...don't feel uncomfortable.....
n yes plz pm me the desire link...u didn't replied my pm....
wow! it was lovely update.....
khushi took a week holiday.....
then direct to arnav.....
she confessed her love to arnav.....
arnav was stunned ....
aman interrupt them....n fire lol...
they finally consummate....
arnav didn't rush this....
he made khushi so comfortable.....
then gradually did all.....
arnav was so careful khushi didn't feel pain...
khushi waited fr pain........lol..
update their after first night naughty morning soon......
lovely update.....
ReplyDeleteshe went to his office....that is so bold of her and she got scared when he was talking angrily over phone....
khushi is cute...cant believe she said and agrred many things to him....
did she just ask "that's it??", ,,,,,lol....
loved the update
- utthra1208(IF)
you didnt send me the blog update of desire...waiting for it.... :(
Hi dear I was silent reader for quite a long time....I read many ff of arshi but you are the best.....I loved your every story.....please updates soon.....I love the way you write.......
ReplyDeleteAnd this chapter was amazing...and hot but the main highlight of update was...kushi saying that's it.,...and Arnav reaction man,,,,,,I was lol.....
Please update soon can't wait .....please...
update was amazing as usual.. Luved that arnav being so gentle.. khushi is so innocent and Adorable.. that was awesomely hot,
ReplyDeletekeep rocking as always
xoxo
dsbj
Amazing update. Khushi confessed to him, she took leave and left 4 his office to say this, great. The lunch was awesome. Liked arnav ordering another dessert for her seeing her enthusiasm. Khushi was so sweet to ask him to buy that 4 lily. Liked how arnav managed the shy khushi, it was romantic.
ReplyDeletewow super duper awesome n hot loved it...
ReplyDeleteplzzz update asap...
I want to say welcome to you dear and thanks for this comment ;)
Deletewho told u wat u write is jus crap??? u feel dat cuz we rnt commentng understand yaar how difficult its to comment in a blog! n sometyms wen im freee n comment it doesnt appear only! nyway finnialy dey confesed! Next part ASAP pllzz! n wil try my best to comment!
ReplyDeleteupdate soon plzzz...
ReplyDeletei....cant ...believe...It *Banging her head into the wall*
ReplyDeleteOuch!! That Hurt....But I deserve it :D :D
I cant Believe that I am reading this update so Damn late
How can I Bloddy Miss such an outstanding update..Agghhhhh...Just kill me now!!!!!
Wait...Dont do it!!!!....If you do :(.....Then how will i comment :P
Acha now lets stop will my bak bak duck and come to the p-....Wait.....
WTH Where did the Duck come from??
I mean I know where they come from What I mean Is WTH Is it doing in my comment
Aghhh Mister Ducky I am gonna complain about you to Donald duck....
Now Mister Duck If you excuse me I have to write a comment and Knock some sense in
The crazy Girl
But remember Me No talking to You/Mister Ducky And Me No Taking to Miss-I-Know-It-Is-Crap
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Dont you dare say this is crap miss crazy girl Nahi to main....Main...Emm....Main kya karun gi?.
Yeah main tum par case kar doon gi....Yeah I will do that...Mera Lawyer Bohot Famous hai...
Guess who?
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MIKEY MOUSE
Yaayy!! :D :D :D :D
Now let me tell you miss Your update was Hotwa Yaar and My Face all redwa *Blushing*
Hai Hai Main maar jawwan Our Arnav Bitwa is So Hotwa and caringwa &Me Jealouswa *Giggles*Heheh that rhymed :p :D :D
Now serious Mood On
I really do mean it is an outstanding update dear I LOVED It
Khushi confessed!!!!Yipppiieee *Happy dancing forgetting the serious mood*Oh yeah Go Khush Oh Yeah
Ooh em sorry I forgot you were still reading * embarrassed*Wait you are reading right?
Well Doesn't matter yaar meri bak bak Koi nahi sunta :/
I loved the way Arnav Handled Khushi being soft and patient..
Its so sweet how he made sure she was totally okay with it
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Ohho Khushi beta Isn't this enough?? Looks like someone wants more
*Winks As gutter mind starts*
Okay Gutter Talk....Not My Thing :D :D :D :D :D
Okay Now IN THE END
Sings "IN THE END OUR LOVE MATTER OH NO NO NO "
Huh wait!!!.... why am i singing Enrique Iglesias"Escape" In middle of A comment *Confused*
But it can actually help so I will use some of the lyrics now *Winks*
""If you feel like Not reading
I'm not gonna beg you to Do
But soon you'll be finding
You can run, you can hide
But you can't escape my comment
You can run, you can hide
But you can't escape my love ;)""
Hehe and Also If you dare to think of your story as crap then it will be this way
"You can run you can hide but yo cant escape my warth" Okay!!! I Hope you understood miss
or Next time First I will kill you
And then I will kill myself as there will be No Crazy girl updating Her Outstanding FF's :D:D:D:D:D
So Now b4 I fill up your entire Comment page with My comment I should Leave :P :D :P :D
Keep Smiling :) :) :) :) :)
~Marrie~
OMG Marrie...you're so much with this lovely funny touchy goody comment....
Deleteyou're so funny with your lawyer...
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDD OMG I can't comment all your comment but it makes me smile all the way dear :************************************
Hehehe Miss Ji I know I am Crazy U dont have to remind me :D :D
DeleteI am crazy And I Know it *Like a boss*
And My lawyer Is actually really powerful
he will make 1000 of children ran after you just by saying this one thing......
"We have to save Marries favorite story...So Kids will you help me....I knew you would"
:D :D
Okay these cartoons are all over my mind
as my sweet devish small brother forcefully makes me see em everyday *Pouts*
He uses the big power called......MOM ...Yeah can you belive that little devil he complains to Mom saying
"Mama Marium baji is not seeing cartoons with me...Scold her" But well I love that stupid Kid :P :D
Ans Reallyyy You liked my comment *Blushes* I Thought you would take a bat and run after me saying
"You idiot you filled up my comment page" :D :D :D :D
But I guess I am saved......For Now :P
Now I should go away b4 I start Babbering again and fill your comment page... :P
Take care and Be crazy as normal is too boring ;)
~Love Marrie~
:DDDDD my god
Deletethan plz plz plz many kisses to your chote from me
this so sweet that he wants you to watch with him cartoons, he knows that this wll be even more funny if his sister is watching with him :D
Sure yaar I will but then he will be confused If I am his Di or any alien took over me :P :D
DeleteLol yeah very funny
To tease him I keep making fun of his cartoons saying
"haww mickey mouse is so stupid"
"How come they not do such a small thing?"
"Waste of time"
And he is like throwing pillows on me trying to make fun of arnav and khushi as he knows I Love them
but He loves them too so he doesn't lolz I tease him soooo much
and he tries to make fun of my favrt stuff but then gives up and kisses my cheek saying
"I Dont like mikey too"
the fact that arnav considered her needs and wants above everything was so so special. hot update no doubt but sweet to.
ReplyDeletesuper hot update I'm still blushing
ReplyDeleteyou write very well naughty girl ;)
Arnav is very loving caring and sweet
can't wait for next part continue soon please
awesome chapter....luv the way Arnav takes it slow wth Khushi n teach her everythng....she was waiting for the pain??? auuuuwwww....she's so cute n innocent....
ReplyDeleteu describe their consummation beautifully...hats off....
It was smoking hot ;)
ReplyDeleteit was hot
ReplyDeletesummaiyasayed