My Girl: chapter 18:
Note: there is "Dumas" who thought she said already yes to him...but no, not yet, I'm sorry because maybe I didn't make it clear to you what they speak and what they thought ...but I will try next time to show this clearly to you, guys....
to "Ruki" yes the story of Love will start from not this but the next update, but I'm sure you will kill me after reading this update :p
to "Najat": I only enjoy reading your comments, I wanted to send you PMs on IF but your inbox is full and I can't :(
to Mzbrar: thank youuuuuuuuuuu for all your lovely comments ;)
and and and:
why there is only few comments????? not on my Girl but on for my angel and the new SS too...first, you courage me to post soon and now , nothing and I become sad:((((((((
and where are my other friends who are also commenting???
and also, I want to said that why to comment like only two words??? :( (amazing update! and that's it??? sometimes it's a bad update, so you can also tell me about your feelings) ^^
Love for all...
don't miss: the seven sins of love
Note: there is "Dumas" who thought she said already yes to him...but no, not yet, I'm sorry because maybe I didn't make it clear to you what they speak and what they thought ...but I will try next time to show this clearly to you, guys....
to "Ruki" yes the story of Love will start from not this but the next update, but I'm sure you will kill me after reading this update :p
to "Najat": I only enjoy reading your comments, I wanted to send you PMs on IF but your inbox is full and I can't :(
to Mzbrar: thank youuuuuuuuuuu for all your lovely comments ;)
and and and:
why there is only few comments????? not on my Girl but on for my angel and the new SS too...first, you courage me to post soon and now , nothing and I become sad:((((((((
and where are my other friends who are also commenting???
and also, I want to said that why to comment like only two words??? :( (amazing update! and that's it??? sometimes it's a bad update, so you can also tell me about your feelings) ^^
Love for all...
don't miss: the seven sins of love
Don't touch....My Girl!
Lavanya
spends like all the day trying to understand the whole story and details from
khushi…khushi now is resting her head on Lavanya’s shoulder…
-that was
like a fairytale my khushi! I mean…it’s unbelievable…even in stories and
dramas…it can’t happen…all this in few time…I mean…it’s so much for you…but I’m
here…you know…I’m here my Khushi!
Khushi
looks at her and nodded positively…
-I’m sure
you’re both crazy people but it’s ok…love can’t wait, right? (Lavanya looks at
her to make her confident)…I mean you're eager to be together…but khushi are
you ready for this? You want to say “yes”?
-I’m ready!
It’s so fast! But still I want to say yes to him so fast but he told me to
wait…he told me things…and…I’m…I think I’m goanna get crazy…I’m like so scared
now…I think…yes…I’m scared, La…you can imagine that I’m his wife and he’s my husband?!!!!!
-oh…both of
you are…so…., yes! I can imagine….but no, no, I won’t imagine!
Lavanya
teased her…both giggled a little…
-ok…now…let’s
get ready!
-yes but
thought where he’s now…
-who? You
mean you’re would be husband?
Khushi
smiles shyly and looks at her phone…but found that even his phone was there…
He left and
forgets to take his phone…??????????
Where is he
now…!?????
Is he hurt
because she doesn’t say “yes” immediately…???????
La:-come on!
I’m sure he’s just here, somewhere in the hotel! He’s just shy…men can also get
shy!...come on, you’re acting like a typical wife already!
Both
removed to lavanya's room now…Payal joined them too…
Lavanya helped
her khushi to put makeup on…and Payal was about to help her wear the white saree…but
khushi stopped them:
-there is
only that color?
-oh no we
have a variety of colors madam! Which your choice?
Lavanya
asked ironically …Khushi pouted and Payal smiles and starts helping her wear
it…the girls start with talks and laughs...
Payal:-you
know if you goanna be wife…wearing sarees will be just elegant and beautiful,
khushi and that suits you also… look at the mirror to see how much you look
…stunning…
Payal just
smiles and kissed her cheek…
-Payal is
so lovely, and La you’re mean!
-oh
right?…ok…I don’t care!....oh...but I'm lovely too...
Lavanya
comes and kisses her cheek too…
Khushi
hugged the two of her friends…and smiles…
-oh…I love
both of you!...
she gets
excited to wear a saree…she never wear sarees before…she never get the chance
to wear those…
The saree
was all white… blouse was red…revealing her milky back…but her long hair was
covering all…still the net pallu was revealing her stomach and her waist…but it
was elegant…even if it is…so sexy on her…she checked herself…she’s
satisfied…but thought a little what will be his reaction…he will find her
beautiful or no?...too much with that saree…those red bangles…red lipstick or
no?...is it too much or no…????...she’s so confused because…now…she wanted to
see if she’s beautiful or no in his eyes…
Lav:-wear
it with heels!
Lav said
adding some blush on her face…
-in my
room!...will go now, join you after!
Khushi said
and runs away to her room…with the hope that she will find him there…
But no…
He’s not
there…
She’s
worried now…she was troubled…she decided to wear her pairs of heels…and go to
look where is he…
She maybe
hurt him without knowing…
When she’s
all ready with her perfect look…she checked again how much she’s amazing and
gets out the room…
To
find…Aman…yes…her ex fiancé, there, looking amazed at her…just before the door…
-Oh, Aman,
hey!
-Khushi…when
you will decide to stop looking amazing?
He said
that and walks towards her and she just walked back and looks at him
uncomfortably…
-Aman,
excuse me, I’m just in a hurry, I should go!
-please
Khushi!
He said
wanting to touch her arm but she walked again away and he missed touching her…
-Khushi?...I
know you still love me!...so, don’t deny!
Khushi
looks at him with anger now:
-you’re
totally wrong!
-oh right?!
-I love
someone else, now, Aman! so please!
-Khushi…you
can lie at the whole world but me…your “so called” boyfriend is just here to
make me jealous, right?
Khushi
looks at him with wild eyes…
-you give
him money to come here and play that he’s your lover…and he’s only some poor
unknown mechanic…but you know khushi that anyone else, more important and so
much better than him could play that role so why him?...let me guess?...he has
so much free time to follow you here?
That’s when
Khushi slaps him with all her force, hardly on his cheek…:
-that poor
unknown mechanic is the man I love, he’s the only man I met who deserves to be
loved…I love him so much that I can faint at that only idea that I belong to
him and you know what…I’m goanna marry him...he’s the only man who is able to
protect me…
Aman who is
holding his cheek where there is the trace of Khushi’s fingers…looks at her
with devilish eyes…and all of a sudden with both his hands…he takes her arms
forcefully and wanted to take her with him…
Khushi felt
helpless:
-let off
me…Aman….I’m goanna shout for help…just let off me…
First,
Khushi wasn’t so much scared…but when he wanted to forcefully and violently
take her with him…starting walking towards another place…looking at her with
his devilish gaze:
-protect
you, right? Where is he, now? Taking a break from his full job of being your so
called boyfriend?
-just leave
my arm!
-you belong
to him? …ohhh…but Khushi, you forget, you still mine!
-I said
just leave, leave me….
Khushi
starts to cry now….as he’s forcefully bringing her with him, not holding but
practically breaking her wrist on his hand:
-we goanna
discuss all this in my room!
Aman closes
his head from her…wanting to kiss her…she felt him so close to her…
She turns
her head other side and starts fighting to push him…
-Noooo! No!
Khushi
starts shouting now…Aman wasn’t able to kiss her and when he failed, he gets
more impatient:
-I know
that you’re shy Khushi, but you will kiss me in my room, right?
-No…I hate
you…I hate you…leave me, please, leave me!
Khushi
sobs…
Aman just
walking with her towards his room not listening…
-no…leave…leave
me….
And then
she starts shouting “Arnav” all over the corridor…at the surprise of Aman who
still believe she loves him and she’s just acting proudly…when she shouts the
name of Arnav out loud so many times and sobbing like that …he turns towards
her, trying to understand the situation but it was too late…
He gets a
hard pinch in his perfect face…
The same
time Khushi is feeling some hands around her waist holding her tight…
First that
pinch wasn’t of Arnav but from some bodyguards who are there…coming at the same
time as Arnav…following him…
When Arnav
saw that he just runs to hold Khushi first…to save her and the bodyguards just
runs to beat Aman…
Khushi
turns to find that it was Arnav who is holding her just hides her face on the
hook of his neck sobbing hardly…
-Arnav…you…here…you
here…Arnav…
-shhhh…
Arnav just
hold her but he was giving his angry fire gaze towards Aman…
He just
puts away a little Khushi’s hair to that he can whisper in her ear:
-it’s ok,
now…I’m here…just a minute, I will be back…
He said
pulling back …just drawing a fast peck on her forehead and walks looking at
Aman, with all the anger of the world…
He just
stopped the bodyguards from beating him and looks at them angrily:
-go away!
He said and
they leave Aman immediately…
Arnav catches the collar of his shirt…
-When My Girl said leave me! to you…you leave
her immediately…
He said
giving him a beat with his head (head to head) hardly enough to make Aman’s nose bleed intensely…
-you know
what I can do with your dirty fingers when you touch her?
Aman starts
nodding negatively, all scared and fearing what it goanna happen to him…
-ss…sorry…sorry…so
sorry!
-you’re
saying that to me, damn it!....you hurt her? you said sorry to her!
Arnav’s
shouts on him…
Aman looks
at him and that aman is now even crying…Arnav could see his tears on his
cheeks…
-I’m…I’m
sorry Khushi!
Khushi just
turns her head other side…he disgusts her now…
Arnav
starts to be more hysteric, seeing khushi’s reaction…means that bastard does
something really bad to her… so, he’s not ready to leave that dirty man…
-tell me,
what did you do to her?
Arnav’s
tone was proving how much he’s dangerous right now…and Aman was just shivering
from fear when he receives two pinches on his stomach…
-defend
yourself or I’m goanna kill you right now!
Arnav’s
leaves him because he wants a fair fight…man to man but the moment he takes his
hand off of his collar…Aman falls on the floor…
Aman’s
joins his two hands together:
-Pity!...PPPPity…Khushi!
please, tell him! I will never bother you again, please…for the God sake…I’m…
Arnav picks
him again from his collar…
-damn
you’re talking too much!...you show your power only before a woman bas****…show
for me what you can do to me! Damn it!
Saying that
he was about to give him another punch when some other hand stops him and it
was Khushi’s hand…she nodded negatively to him to stop while she's crying...
Arnav just
leaves him again and Aman falls again on the floor…closing his eyes…breathing
hardly….fearing another punch….
Arnav
looking at Khushi eyes he leaves that bas**** to hug her again…
He just carries
her in his arms and walks with her to their room…and she’s just holding his
neck and crying against his chest, silently…
*******
In their room:
*******
In their room:
He’s
looking at her, softly and the fact that he’s softly putting her in bed ...looking like he was now another man, not the same who punches Aman that hardly way, it was
unbelievable…
He just
puts her on bed…and then looks at Aman’s fingers marks on her wrist and then at
her both arms and gets angry all over again, wanting to come back to finish him like
crazy…but she holds his hand…
-No…stay
with me…
-he hurts
you? (he touches her wrist delicately)….does it hurt?
He asked
nervously…
-no…no,
it’s…little bit…
She said
unable to lie before his intense gaze…
He was
about to stand up again…
-where are
you going?
-I want to
kill him, right now!
-you
already finished him!
Arnav
smiles at her innocent reply and his smile calm her down the more…
-but…why? What he’s thinking he’s doing?
-but…why? What he’s thinking he’s doing?
-he
wanted…he wanted…Arnav…
Khushi
starts to panic again…and he has to just lie down on the bed beside her and
holds her in his arms…
-he
thought…he thought I still love him…he doesn’t believe it’s you whom I love…Arnav!
She’s just
talking like a little baby…Arnav couldn’t resist to hug her more to him…
She
clutches his shirt and she starts sobbing like a baby:
-but where
are you all the day??? Where?? What if…if…(sobs)
-no! Nothing
could happen to you, you know I’m always here! and I was with Akash…
Khushi
looks up to him, wiping her tears…and he’s wiping with his fingers softly also,
now…
-Akash?
-hanging
out!
He smiles
to change her ideas…she smiles too…and hides herself on his arms
again…breathing against his chest…then , she breaks the hug...cupped his face, wanting to said something but looking at those marks in her wrist...he becomes anew angry and stands up all of a sudden...
he looks for any cream to calm the pain on her wrists and arms...and when he didn't find....he looks at her with desperate gaze...and then:
-you have no ointment to calm those?
-no!
she said touching her wrist...
-I'm goanna kiss them...to make it better!
she blushed and like a little baby, she gives him her hand...he smiles and takes her hand...
he looks for any cream to calm the pain on her wrists and arms...and when he didn't find....he looks at her with desperate gaze...and then:
-you have no ointment to calm those?
-no!
she said touching her wrist...
-I'm goanna kiss them...to make it better!
she blushed and like a little baby, she gives him her hand...he smiles and takes her hand...
-khushi…jaan
Khushi
looks up at him…can't believe her own ears…
With his
hand he caresses her wrist and touched the bangles she is wearing…
-those??
-bangels!
he smirked...
-I know but...
he looks at her wrist and kissed there softly...it affected her and she touched his hair:
-those??
-bangels!
he smirked...
-I know but...
he looks at her wrist and kissed there softly...it affected her and she touched his hair:
-Arnav…I’m
yours!
She said
suddenly…looking at her man…
-I know!
He said
firmly…
-what?!
It’s just
amuse her when he’s all confident about her love…
-what?! (he rises his eyebrow) I
know you’re mine!
He said
proudly looking at her red eyes…red yet shining now…
-Arnav
don’t ever leave me alone!
Arnav just
hugs her even closer…and then all pouting…she breaks the hug:
-Arnav…should
go to the mehendi…all are waiting for me to join, thought, I should go?…
She said
and starts to leave his arms and his wrist kisses…when he finally could look at the outfit she’s
wearing…because he was worried about her…he didn’t notice she’s wearing a
saree….and now he just notices...
-wait!
he shoutes suddenly...
-wait!
he shoutes suddenly...
Poor khusi thank god arnav come on the time
ReplyDeletesuperb updt
ReplyDeleteluv it
summaiyasayed
aww glad that he came on time
ReplyDeleteand lol hes so confident of her love=]
awesome update
ReplyDeleteloved it
drunkiiebabe
Awesome update
ReplyDeleteI hate Aman he's so cheap
Poor khushi thank god Arnav came on time
can't wait for next part continue soon please and thank u for pm me :)
awesome update that jerk aman got a beat down hew will never forget loved how arnav was taking care of her thanks for the pm loved the update loved how he made him apologized
ReplyDeleteLoved d update
ReplyDeleteAmsn deserves it
Thanx for pm
--MISHTEE--
loved it....:)
ReplyDeleteaman is so disgusting
ReplyDeletearnav beat him.very well
love it when he said my girl
superb update, i lke it arnav's confident about khushi's love i like whole update but the conversation between arnav and khushi in their room i like most
ReplyDeletehi i m new reader of ur ff, i like your all arshi ff i want to comment but how to comment on blog i don't know so i can't comment but now i will comment, plzzzzzzzzzz add me to ur buddy list and send me pm
ReplyDeletenice update dear ... and end when he said WAIT ..sure something gone happen now ..when she wearing saree and after all her sare needs to be Adjust and sure he dont want HIS GIRL body expose for some one ;)
ReplyDeleteawesome update
ReplyDeletedamn tht bitch aman X(
ReplyDeletethnk god arnav came at ryt timeee.. :)
thnx 4 pm :)
ohhhh wait
ReplyDeletehow can i wait when i know that's something is coming in his mind..
first time in saree (red and white)red lips red check . j peux me dire he want to ajuster saree coz after the accident....
finaly he said MY GIRL
tks my crazy
i know i'm late :(
ReplyDeletebut i lovee this update
arnav's concern kill me
and a special extra thanks for this update making special to me :)
though arnav said, i cant wait ;)
<3
nice update arshi are adorable:)
ReplyDeletewhat wil arnav do seeing khushi's blouse?????;)
kushigowda
awesome part my crazy head.........
ReplyDeleteaman rot in hell.........
arnav came on time.......
he soothe khushi's pain wid his love.....
khushi looking stunning......
but whn arnav noticed he shout???????
i think he will ask her to change as possessive bf......
update soon....
- Akorshi -
love it
ReplyDeleteArnav and Khushi r sooo good for each other ! Really loved how Arnav protected her ! bOTH R ADORABLE ! Waiting for Arnav's reaction to Khushi's saree !
ReplyDeleteLaxshalovearshi
Awesome update. Aman s so cheap. Glad that arnav was there on time and gave aman wat he deserved. Loved how arnav s taking care of khushi
ReplyDeletegod yaar, you scared the crap out of me with the comment you left for Ruki. i though arshi was gona break up!
ReplyDeletedamn that aman! i just wana squeeze his head until it pops off!! grrrr
I can't wait anymore
ReplyDeleteplease update dear
Nyc updt
ReplyDeleteNice update !!! Poor khuahi ...
ReplyDeleteboth r so cute
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