For my angel: Chapter 25:
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Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam doon?
Arnav looks
at Khushi with wide eyes…
All wet…
He passes
his hand on his hair, he looks down at his clothes…he looks down at Lily all
wet and giggling…at Khushi all wet and shivering from little coldness and lot
of fear…
He retains
a smile…
He couldn’t
anymore retain it…
He
just…giggled…taking all the stress out…
Khushi was
admiring how much he’s adorable while laughing…
He’s even
more handsome…
Khushi
smiles finally seeing his mood changed…
The hose
falls off in between her hands…
She’s for
the first time seeing him like that…
She’s all
mesmerized even when he stops laughing…
Arnav took
the hose…wanting to take his revenge…
Lily:-oh
no….Paa…
She said
running away…Sushi barking following her…all around…
Khushi also
wanted to run away but it was too late…
First, he
catches her from behind…shower her with the water, all amused…
-Paa leave
maa…na…
Lily
pleaded…
So, he
pointed the water on Lily too…she giggled running away, again…
Trapped….Khushi
is totally in his arms and couldn’t move…
Feeling the
wetness and warmness same time…warmness of his chest against her back…
With one
hand encircling her waist…he’s almost lifting her by one…he’s walking and
trying to shower Lily same way…
She’s
feeling his breath in her nape…
-Arnavji!
She
difficultly called him…pushing away his hand on her tummy and waist…
-shhh…look!
He drops
the hose of water from his hand to point at the sky, showing her…
The color
of the sky announcing the twilight…was so beautiful…
Incredibly
beautiful…
The light
of the sun seems insisting to stay for some other minutes…
The sun is
now perfectly orange…
The sky had
all the degrees of orange colors, little of purple, little of yellow…
Khushi
smiles seeing it…
He can side
way see her smile…and then looks at the sky…he smiles too looking at it…
It was
really beautiful…
The
farmhouse was so near of the nature with all her beauties…
They admire
it when they feel anew the water on them…
Both look
surprised at Lily giving them a shower….it was her turn to take revenge…
Arnav hugs
khushi the more…pressing her on him…hiding his face on her nape…while khushi hides her face with her hands...
-oh
no…lily…No…
Khushi
giggled…
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Water game and
twilight…
Was perfect
moment ever…
the three of them lived…
the three of them lived…
Even poor
Sushi who is barking when they all enter…leaving him in the kitchen alone,
closing the door behind…
He was all
wet so Arnav refuses to that he enter also the bathroom and the room with them…
Khushi puts
Lily in the bathtub full of warm water…
She starts
bathing her while she still all wet…shivering…
Arnav was
there…
-the other
room has a shower too…you go, I will take care of Lily!
He said to
her…
Because she
was feeling cold and needed some warm water, she nodded and leave Lily…
Arnav looks
at Lily enjoying swimming in the tub…playing with water…
Ar:-you
like to stay here for a little?
Lily
nodded…she can’t have enough of water…
-ok, stay
here a little, I will go and look for a towel for you, you stay good girl, ok?
-ok!
Arnav looks
at the towels which are on a closet in the guest's room…he thought that khushi may
forget to take one as the towels were there untouchable…
He just go
other room…he knocked and when there is no reply, he enters…
He knocked
again at the bathroom door…
No sound of
water in the shower…
A:-you need a
towel…I thought…I bring that to you…
Khushi
fighting with the zip of her petticoat…placed on the back…the blouse and the
petticoat refused to be taking off as they are all wet…stuck to her body…and
her fingers are hurt from the morning, it was difficult for her…
k:-ohh…great…
She said…
A:-any
problem?
-no!
She shouted
nervously…
-ouch…
She hurts
herself by the zip which being so close to her skin and forced by her to be
opened…
Hearing
that…he tries opening then the door, Khushi forgets to lock…she thought she
locked it…but here he’s inside…
Looking at her…
With only a
petticoat and a blouse…she felt all shy…
-you?
she hides herself immediately with her hands…trying to hide her bare waist…
-you?
she hides herself immediately with her hands…trying to hide her bare waist…
But he
walks towards her…
Nervously,
she walked back…turned other side…
He’s now
facing her milky back only…
He could
see a red trace in the level of the zip…before she makes her long hair hide
from him all her back, hiding also the zip…
A:-you want
to take it off?
K:-no!
She said
firmly…
K:-it’s ok,
you can go!
She said
with a weak voice…she knows he will not leave that easily…
A:-you can't take a shower with your clothes on!
He said
walking towards her…
Touching
her hair to put it on one side of her shoulder…
-no!
She turns fast to face him…
He was so
close…
When she
turns his eyes fall on her cleavage…
She saw it
and turns again to her position…
A:-let me
help you!...Don't worry!
He ordered…
This time
he firmly puts away her long hair…
He’s
feeling she stopped breathing when his warm hand touched the end of her
back…on the level of the zip of her petticoat…but he just unzipped it, difficultly…then, she
felt that his hand leave it…but again his fingers come back to rub the red trace,
caused by her when she tried to take it off…
His fingers
caress her back…from there to the dori of the blouse…that he untied…
She felt a
weakness in her knees…closing her eyes…
But it
wasn’t enough…
He
has to catch her, holding her by waist…because when she felt his lips on her
back…she was about to go away from him…
He firmly
holds her to him…he makes her turn to face him…
Little
forcefully, he pulled her chin up to him…
Still
holding her chin…he waits for her to look at him…
Once he
could see the same feeling he has in her eyes…
He places
his hand on the back of her head…to pull her face closer…
Khushi was
feeling all weak…her hands clutch his wet shirt…
She’s wide
awake…that her first kiss goanna happen that second…when she felt his lips on
her lips…
For the
first time of her life…she’s been that close to a person…
For the
first time she’s feeling high…
Closing her
eyes, losing her mind…
Unconsciously,
her lips were parted like to welcome him…
She felt so
warm…even if she’s almost naked…
But she
couldn’t do anything much…
Despite his
desires, Arnav was the nicest possible…all his moves were gentle…he kissed her
slowly, surely, firmly…like those rosy lips were so much vulnerable…he explored
them, taking all his time…feeling them with his lips…when he felt them parted
for him…he introduced his tongue…sweet…she’s tasting so sweet, the way he
imagined…
He so wants
to that kiss to last...but he knows she’s all nervous…she doesn’t kiss him
back…he knows she’s so much confused to react, because she was only closing her
eyes…the important was that he’s feeling that she’s all ok with it…seeing the
way she’s arching her body towards him…clutching his shirt tight…
But he felt
a salty liquid mixed to the sweetness of her mouth…
Tears…
Her tears??
He opens
his eyes…
Suddenly
and sadly, he pulled back…
To see tears
are dropping from her eyes…Arnav was surprised…he doesn’t have the intention to
hurt her damn it…
-I…did I
hurt…
She nodded
negatively…
-N...I’m fine!
She whispered…
He knows
she wanted to stay alone now…
-ok…now…you
will catch cold…just take a warm bath, ok?
She nodded…looking
down…
he just walks away from there…licking his lips, don't believing that he just…just kiss her!...but that he hasn't enough,yet...
Seeing the
towel…he wanted to come in again…but he just put it near the door and went away…
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Was it a
huge mistake to kiss her?
No, it
wasn’t!
He wants
it!
She wants
it!
Then why to
cry???
Of course
she is mad at him…
Arnav was
trying to dry Lily’s hair with towel, thinking about it…when he heard her
calling him…
She’s
calling him…”Arnavji”??????
He makes
lily put another towel on to get warm:
-will come
back, baby…
Lily just
nodded…she’s happiest child ever…
***
He comes to
her in the other bathroom…
-khushi?
From the
door lightly opened, he could see her beautiful face…
K:-I need…
She said
shyly…
K:-my clothes...please!
She continued
hesitantly…
If her eyes
are avoiding looking at him,
now, they maybe could hide the truth…but her face and expressions couldn’t hide it…
now, they maybe could hide the truth…but her face and expressions couldn’t hide it…
She wanted
that kiss too…he’s sure, she's not mad!…if so, why she doesn’t try to push him once, when he
was kissing her so slowly, ready any moment to her “push-away” gesture…and why
she’s now so confident with his presence around…
-Arnavji…
She whispered
again seeing he doesn’t reply…
-ok!
He nodded…he
wanted her to trust him…that’s what he wants, now…after that kiss…he doesn’t
know why…but…he wanted it!
Opening the
closet where all their clothes bought by Aman and sent by his sister are there…he
finds her nighty white outfit with the dupatta…but then remember!…she will need…that…he
looks at them…he finds them hidden on a corner hidden by another saree…
White ones
and pink ones…
white or pink?
white or pink?
He smiles…he
has to touch her bra now??...her panties…
He felt
like he’s doing what a husband did…and…no!…no guilt or hesitation in that at all…in the contrary…it
felt so right…he picked the white ones…hiding them in the palm of his hand…
He comes
back to her…knocked the door…
He will
believe that he’s a saint or a homosexual if he would just give her those
clothes like that, from the door...without teasing or looking...
But he did…he’s
also proud of himself…he wanted her trust…here he’s!
Still when
she takes the outfit…she doesn’t say anything…
A:-you don’t
need anything else?
K:-yes…oh…no!...thank
you!
-I’m sure,
yes, take it!
He tends
his hand holding her underwear…
She takes
it and closes the door, so fast, breathing heavily…
All that was
happening first time with her…how it is possible…all that…???
She has no
control on her heart anymore…
And she
wanted to laugh, same time to cry…
His touch…his
lips…his hands…fingers…
His kiss…
First on
her back…
And second, on her
lips…she washed her face again…her face was burning form shyness and multitude
of feelings…
On the
other hand…Arnav was all the way thinking…
How it felt
heaven…to touch her, to kiss her…but also he was thinking at the progress of their relation now...
He’s like
trusting her, also…feeling that he has to open his heart for her, that it felt good when he just listen to his heart…that she’s the one deserving his care and
his feelings…
Those feelings
he couldn’t give a name, yet…
can he name this "Love"?
can he name this "Love"?
Hiii I m the first hay iss payar ko kya naam doon first kiss soo romentic
ReplyDeletelovely update...........
ReplyDeletewow this is sooo lovely update....
ReplyDeletewaiting for the next part yaar
superb dear superb
ReplyDeletei'm spechless to write anth
first how beautifully u write the garden shower it was like i was there to watch them
and then the waited kiss........hats off to u
the way u show the gantellness of arnav n then his try to get her trust make a super natural sense
and then the question in his mind ...ohhh great .........super impact of ipkknd
last but not the list u deserve all the love from us <3<3<3 yes yes i mean it damn it
thank u for the banner on the begining u use
love u hamesha
ur little lopa
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aww amaaazing!!
ReplyDeletelove the water fight and twilight=]
and aww their first kiss=]
amazing update
ReplyDeleteloved it
Amazing updt
ReplyDeleteSUPER DUPER Amazing update ...loved there kiss was HOT .. and end was soo romantic ..cant wait for next to read hoe he gone win her trust and more her love
ReplyDeletewoooooooowwwwwww awsam superb i love itttttttttttt finally their first kiss i think i waited 4 it more than them loool
ReplyDeleteI like how hes trying to build a foundation for a good relationship- not just jumping from one physical thing to the next. Khushi and Arnav have to spend the rest of there lives together, if the mess things up now, it'll turn into a sore spot for the rest of their lives.
ReplyDeletemz.brar on IF
DeleteAwesome update
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Love it
Amazing update.
ReplyDeleteI loved their first kiss after the awesome water fight.
It was so sweet of Arnav to give Khushi her clothes without staring at her.
He wants Khushi to trust him.
Lily is adorable as always.
Looking forward to the next update.
Thanks.
Zafi
wowwwwwwwww their first kiss....... superb....... i loved it.......
ReplyDeletevery lovely update....
atlast......they kissed!!!!!.....LOVED IT......IT'S AWESOME.....
ReplyDeletetheir first kiss.....LOVED IT
ReplyDeleteFibally love is in the air :*
ReplyDeletebach briti nebda ya majnouna arshian....hhhhh t'as compris ce que j'ai dit
ReplyDeleterealy you describe every etape in such an amazing way
first how he lokks at her all wet and caress his hearand looks at himslef , then looks at little lily then at her again vraiment j'ai imaginée la scene comme je suis dedons .....taking her by waist like he carrye her
aw the twilight so romantic.
second the naughty lilte her turn to wet both of them...he hide in khushi nape and her hide her face by hands.... so cute.
and the most wonderful part mmm the bathroom NO COMMENT
first trust and then kiss to make and grand etape for love
now elle a le courage de l'appeler et demander her clothes
my crazy girl conituée comme ça tous slowwly take your time to describe everything btw them i'm not hurry to finish this FF.
gros biz
amazing update... loved there first kiss and arnav showing his concern and love :)
ReplyDeleteWow!!! Amazing update.. I loved it.. Thank you... Plz next part soon.. Im dying here to read next part.. Poz plz
ReplyDeleteyaaaa finally they kissed!!!!
ReplyDeletei hope they can evaluate their feelings soon.
Waiting for the update dear
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ReplyDeletei can't get enough of this chapter i keep on reading it again and again ... i am dying to read the next part i am so exited
ReplyDeletewow! awesome........
ReplyDeletefinally they kissed.....
arnav kissed on her back......
thn lips....lovely..
khushi is happy......
i hope arnav soon realize he loves khushi.....
aww arnav giving khushi's inner wear wid clothes...
as cute husband........
update soon.....
- Akorshi -
OMG Finally they KISSED ! Another OMG hE started to progree their relationship and the word "love" came to his mind which is really good sign ! LOVED IT !
ReplyDeleteLaxshalovearshi
hey mind blowing update
ReplyDeleteyayyyyyy they finallllly kissed soooo happpy
love love water wetting scene sooo romantic and very very cute
lily awesome as per usual
amazing ending love how hes confused if he loves her or not
superb writing
cant wait for the next update
plz plz update soon
omg this is getting exciting
ReplyDeletethey KISSED !!!!! wooww ok no HE KISSED loll ..i wish she responded but at least she didnt push him back
am so happy
the was so hot ..in the bathroom ..woah my lappy is suffering from high temperature
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UPDATE SOON! here is a peck from me too :*
Awesome update loved it that was so cute loving the naughty asr loved the kiss and having to choose her clothes loved how he was thinking about the kiss loved the update thanks for the pm
ReplyDeletebeautiful !!!!!!!!!SUPERB love it !!!!! Arnav is so wahouuu love this story , continue soon cant wait for the next chapter
ReplyDeleteamazing update
ReplyDeleteloved it
loved the kiss
continue soon
thanks for the pm
drunkiiebabe
amaazing updatee
ReplyDeletehope he will realise his feelings
so romantic and hot happening update
ReplyDeletelakshyaNkt
wow nyc update dere relation is improvin day by day dats realllie good....
ReplyDeleteI read it again.
ReplyDeleteIt is a fantabulous update.
Now please update the next one thanks.
This is your 35th comment.
Zafi
Superb update..
ReplyDeleteFinally the first kiss..
superb updt
ReplyDeleteluvd it
summaiyasayed
Awesome update loved it
ReplyDeleteFinally they kissed Arnav and khushi's first kiss
I'm so excited for next part continue soon please and thank u for pm me :)
Its me melihoney dear. Awww finally they kisssed and thanks dear for this beautiful kiss. Now its party time, gosh loved the update and their first kiss.
ReplyDeleteassmmmee parrttt..!! ive been readng ur parts in fb..!!! n cant make myself wait more.. i serched in google...!! :D n ive got tis sitee..! n was lykk 25 CHHAAPPPPPSSS UPPDDAAATTEEDD.. n i read all in one gooo..... belive me u r an aassmmee wriitteerr..!!! ;) nnneexxtt paartt ASAP pllleaahh..!!! n well... can i know.. how do i know wen u update a new ppaarrt?? is der nyoder way oder den chkng it regularly?? :) Hope u/anyone reply.. :)
ReplyDeletethats was a beautiful update..finally arnav kissed her...wow.. no doubt he will be a cute and naughty husband...he should start with friendship...waiting for next...
ReplyDeletewonderful update.....
ReplyDeleteloved cute lily....
now she fels confident that may be he also likes her...???
she is not sure of her feelings towards him but yet she feels happy seeing his care, concern and love....
loved the update very much
beautiful update. loved it . continue soon ..waiting ...
ReplyDeleteAmazing update.
ReplyDeleteThe water game was beautiful. Khushi admiring smiling arnav. Wow, their first kiss. But wat made her cry. So he s all set to win her trust. He doubts whether its love, nice progress. Pls continue soon
superb :D
ReplyDeletearshi first kiss....wow n arnav giving khushi her clothes...n realizing his feelings wow nice update
ReplyDeletekushigowda(IF)
amazingly assmmmmeeee update..!!
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love it
ReplyDeleteand sorry for the late comment
india094-if
First of all sorry for d late comment the comment box did not appear to comment
ReplyDeletelovely update so finally their lips met n she was admiring him hope arnav realize his love for her soon
tnx 4 d pm
nishi/if
Finally they kissed thank god lily didnt interrupt them this time ..
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