For my angel:
chap 13:
The Deal
Ar:-Miss
Gupta…
-you??!...
He stops
and looks at her…in her eyes…
He could
see she’s shocked and nervous and troubled…
Khushi
looks at him…for awhile…she doesn’t care…neither he’s making her scared nor she
was ready to listen to him….she wants to talk so...she continues talking to him…pointing him by her
index….
Kh:-you?! and
me?????!...you! And…I mean: I…with you…???
Khushi
looks at him with questioning eyes…she takes her index away and looks at him…
Kh:-Talk!
(she said all troubled, the cheeks red from anger)
He was
about to talk but again, angry like her but…she cuts him…
-what do
you…think when you think about that?
-excuse me?!
Troubled,
she couldn’t find her words…
He was
angry but cold and indifferent….
She was
angry but the blood is boiling inside her and many thoughts are fighting in her
brain….just be imagining him being her husband…she looks at him…he goanna be
her husband….
Means…
Means…she
will cook for him?...she will eat with him?...she will talk with him? Think about
her future with him? Sleep with him?...and maybe she will also have to kiss him...what???....her
gutter mind was on for awhile…she looks at his lips…and then looks down
immediately…like a teenager…she felt shy and she regrets that look…that “not
innocent” look…
Kh:-I
mean…how did…this…when you thought about this…how? like that?....I mean…like
that…this idea…I…Listen! I can’t …me, I can’t be your wif…(she couldn’t
complete that word, she whispered it) I don’t even think about you as a friend…and
now, I have to accept you as my…No…I…No…
Arnav looks
at her…he was already angry by all what she said to him within a second…but
God! Why? Why he’s finding the way she angry that much childish…and…that much…NO!
NO! Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada….!!!
He felt
that he was enough passionate…he didn’t say anything about all that…and here he
wanted to talk and she’s talking non sense…with those eyes staring at him and
then looking down and then back at him, challenging him…
He felt
that awkward feeling and then all angry anew, he said:
Ar:-ok! So
you’re not agreeing about that! Fine! I was here to preciously ask you about
your opinion before we fix the date!...ok…then…
He was
about to leave the room but she shout…
Kh:-NO!
He turns
his head to look at her…
Yes, she
intrigues him…that girl…she will drove him crazy…
-No!...wait….mmm…I
mean…(she hesitates) about the marriage…it’s…I mean…We should discuss that…
-what do
you want to discuss?
She looks
at him all serious…a thing that he should know now…she should tell him about,
she tell that firmly:
Kh:-if I’m
going to marry you, you should know that I’m doing this only for the sake of my
buaji…
She said that
in one go and eyes down, she prays her Devi Maya secretly and then after awhile
she looks up to him…to his reaction….if he will go she will not retain him…and
about Buaji promise…she could marry any other boy…right?!
Arnav looks
at her…he seems to be little surprised about her frankness…he was about to
reply when his mobile rings…
He hangs up
immediately …
-hi baby!
“Hi baby”??
and he is asking for her hand?
-yes my
angel…
“yes my
angel”?? and he’s now about to fix his marriage with her…???
-No…I’m
coming soon…ok ok ok…I will not be late…but just don’t get angry against
me…ok?...promise?....I love you too…careful! No! no! don’t trouble HP! Play the
aunty Game…yes, it’s fun…yes….ok…my Lily!
Khushi
looks at him…he can be sweet…but this can happen only with his angel…Lily…
Khushi
smiles a little thinking about her…she misses her…it’s been so long…a week
without seeing her…she was busy with Buaji and she didn’t see her…
Ar:-So…Miss
Gupta?...should we fix the date or not?...if no, we will leave, if yes, you
should know that we have something in common; I haven’t any emotions towards
you too!…the marriage is just a sort of a deal…for the two of us…you’re doing
it for the sake of your Buaji! I’m doing it for my angel…I’m ok to support you
helping your Buaji and giving her the best conditions possible to get the best treatment…you
support me taking care of Lily!...she wants you…to be…to be…
Kh:-her
mum?
Khushi
looks shocked at him, first and then she takes her time thinking and looking at
him…
She has the
confirmation…: she hates that man to the core…
She hates
that language too much…
But…
But…
Only that
name was enough for her to nod her head positively…
Lily…
She wanted
to enter Lily’s life…
Yes, she
wanted to take this girl in between her arms and teach her to not to be rude
like Papaa…but be always an angel…
She looks
at him and tends her hand…
-I’m ok!
He looks at
her eyes…and then at her hand….he takes his time…
She’s
confident and fabulous and he doesn’t like that too much…
He holds
finally her hand to make their “deal” an official one…
Deal…or
promise…
When those
hands join each other…seems like an electric shock attacks both of them…
Both take
his hand off…and gets out of the room…
**
They get
out…
And by that
“deal” or like that they arrange them to call it…not only their engagement was
fixed for the next Saturday of the same week…
But their
marriage will take place the same month…
Khushi shivered
when she heard that less than three weeks and she will be Mrs. Raizada….
And because
Buaji can’t stay alone after the marriage of Khushi…both will remove to RM…
Both: Buaji
and Khushi….
Kh:-what
about Lily?
They all
look at her…
Nani:-what
about her?
Kh:-I mean…we
should inform her that I’m goanna enter her life…I’m goanna be with her…
Arnav looks
at her…
Damn it!
Why she
should be that much…fabulous????!...fabulous in thinking about that…
Lily doesn’t
know about that story about him marrying Khushi…
Yes, she
wanted Khushi to be her mum…
But… she want
to her Papaa to be married again???
Khushi
thought about it …what if she hates her…knowing that?
Many kids don’t
want to their parents to get another life…
Lily will
not be informed about the deal…
No one from
the family knows about what they spoke in the room or their ideas…
Lily…
Kh:-I want
to inform her myself!
She said
looking at Arnav…
About Khushi-Lily
stuffs…Arnav doesn’t plan to make any objection…
He saw in
her file and in her gestures for those days…that she knows something about kids…more
than him…much more…
******
RM:
Lily’s
room:
Lily was
playing when she felt two hands coming and hiding her eyes…she can’t see who is
there…she wanted to know who is hiding her eyes, don’t letting her see….
Lily:-who?
With her
soft hands she touched the fingers don’t letting her to see…
Lily:-not paa?!
Not HP!...than who?
The
voice:-guess?
And then
the hands get off the delicate face…
Lily
immediately turns…
All happy…
All
surprised…
All excited…
Li:-Mith!!!
It was
Khushi who comes especially for her…that same day…she comes along with Raizada
Family, letting Buaji with Payal…only to talk with that angel…and to be honest…because
she missed her too much…
Kh:-my
baby!
Lily cupped
Khushi’s face in between her tiny hands…and she looks at her…and then she
hugged her tight…tighter…Khushi could feel her little heart beating too much…from
happiness…
Lily was
playing on the carpet in the floor…and now Khushi was on the floor…and Lily was
standing and looking at Khushi like that…
She missed
her Miss…her father explains to her that Miss is absent because her Buaji is
sick but still…she missed her…and that too too much!
And then
she has the idea to ask…:
Lily:-your
buaji…fine?
Her look
and her voice and her innocence and the way she asked her about her Buaji makes
Khushi all vulnerable…two tears come out of her eyes…
Kh:-she’s
fine for now…you missed me?
The little
angel hugs her so tight again…Khushi smiles at that power Lily puts to hug her
every time…
Lily:-me…I
love you…
Kh:-and
me…I love you more!
Lily smiles
satisfied about her Miss’s answer…she’s happy now…
She pecks
her two cheeks and Khushi does the same, pressing more…
Little Lily
presents her toys and dolls to Khushi…
Khushi
played a little and then she takes Lily on her lap…
-you want
me to be always with you?
Lily nodded
positively…
-so you
want me to stay with you? (Lily nodded)…what if I will be living here with you…
-you?...you
can?
Khushi
smiles and nodded…
Lily smiles
and excited, she gets up…
-will you?
-you know
for that…I should mmm…marry your…marry your papaa…means me and your papaa
should be married to that I can stay here…
Lily looks
at khushi all thinking about all that in her little head…
-want you
marry him, please…and thtay (stay) with me?...Paa is good…he’s good…and nithe
(nice)…he has many books…he can tell us both many many thtories (stories)…he
knows all flowers names and he…
Lily takes
a deep breath as she talked too much, putting all her energy and looks at
Khushi with her cute, innocent beautiful big eyes…waiting like a little cat…for
khushi to talk… to say something …
But Khushi
was fascinated how that little baby gets it and how she talks praising her papaa
and how she’s convincing her to stay and to marry him…
She smiles
to her…
Lily
serious face transformed to a happy face…
She holds
Khushi’s neck…
-I will
marry your papaa…
Lily smiles…
Her noise
touching Khushi’s noise…
They have
that embrace that only mums and daughters know about it…
-you’re my
mum now?
Khushi
nodded…without breaking that tight embrace…
Both need
each other…
Arnav was
present during that entire private discussion…
He wasn’t
seeing one angel…
But two…
Khushi was
a gift from God…
An angel…sent
from an unknown place…
To make his
own angel happy…
He felt safe…
He felt
good…
He was
ready to make Khushi stay with them from this evening…
Precap: The
Marriage…
Waiting for
your lovely comments…
awesome
ReplyDeletesuper
wonderful
just loved it
i loved lily reaction
she is sooooo cute
Love it very
ReplyDeletecute
sweet
different
emotional
and interesting story
waiting for romantic and hot update too ;)
Awesome update lily is so cute i just love her
cant wait to see some beautiful and cute scenes between lily Arnav and khushi
ASR6262
it was the best chapter
ReplyDeletelily reaction is awesome
waiting for Arshi marriage
how will their relationship proceed
amazing waiting!!!!
emotional update beautifully done loved how khushi wanted to ask liliy before saying anything loved for once asr tought of her in a good way and thought she was angel and was fabulous loved lily and khushi bond awesome update
ReplyDeletelovely update...
ReplyDeleteso its a deal that a good start ...
he is doing it for lily but khushi is doing not only for her buaji
i feel she loves lily very much that she wants her to be her family ..
i love the way arnav had started seeing khushi as an angle...
and i am sure he will fall in love with lily's mum...
Read pt 6 - 13 just love the way u hv developed d story till date love d bonding b/w kushi n lily waiting for the story to develop for now its for buaji n lily's sake but waiting to c the love blooming b/w arhi
ReplyDeletenishi755(IF)
Fantastic update.
ReplyDeleteI Loved it.
So Arnav and Khushi made a deal.
I loved Lily and Khushi talks. How Khushi explained to Lily that in order for KHushi to be Lily's mom she needs to marry her Papa.
I sdored the way Lily was trying to convince KHushi that Arnav is nice and his many attributes. How sweet is Lily.
Awesome precap.
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.
Zafi
''Paa is good…he’s good…and nithe (nice)''.........''He wasn’t seeing one angel…But two…''
ReplyDeletethese line r amazing my apu
super cute update ever
yes u predict me right
wow next part will be about marriage
can't wait to see coming more cuteness from u
AND THE THOUGHT THAT U PUT THE SONG HERE FOR ME MAKE ME FELL SPECIAL DEAR
thank u so much my apu
allah bless u with more talent
ur lopa
hey amazing update
ReplyDeleteso they are finally agreed to get married
love the lily-hushi scene soo cute love their bond
love seeing lily happy soo happy her wish came true
cant wait to see what happends next
upddarte soon
hey superb update yar
ReplyDeletejo bhi ho "DEAL" tho pakka hogay
i am very happy for that
in what ever conditions they will marry it will convert in to pure love
as they are "made for each other"
Lilly & her mith(miss) convo is superb yar
i loved the way Lilly is convincing her mith for marriage
by this we can say how much Lilly is loving khushi
arnav is seeing his "two" angels wow
PLZ don't jump directly in to marriage yar put some of the things which will happen before marriage
in this you put Lilly-khushi's & arnav-khushi's scenes it will be fun to read
waiting eagerly for next update
wow wow wow very veryyyyyyyyyyy beautiful lovely update...
ReplyDeletei loved Khushi-lily in this update very much....
ha soon our Arhi is gng to get married
from jenji08
Fabulous update.. Liked the way Kushi spoke to Lily about her marriage. I hope they will work out together to make this marriage a success and both of them start expressing their feelings towards each other openly. Arnav already has some feelings only thing is that he needs to understand that. Looking forward for the next update. Reality Truth - IF User
ReplyDeleteAwww update so cute.
ReplyDeleteKhushi and lily's relation is very beautiful.
that DEAL was so cool lol !
ReplyDeletekhushi way of revealing about the marriage to Lily was awesome ...Arnav your so lucky ;)
Finally the days gone come ... Was really emotional update I just loved the way lily was trying to say about her father good points .. Can't wait for next post it soon
ReplyDeleteloved it......cute lily....love u too.....
ReplyDeleteOhoh what a wonderful part . You give each scene it's right . So both of them take it as a deal.
ReplyDeleteEmotional scene btw lily and khushi , how his angel convinced khushi to marry her papa mmmm to make her agreed . Thanks so mush my crazy girl for this DEAL
Awww...it was super duper cute update..specially the part where Lily is convincing her miss to marry her papa..
ReplyDeleteHumayra(IF)
Super cute update
ReplyDeletesuperb updt
ReplyDeleteluv it
updt soon
summaiyasayed
awesome update
ReplyDeleteemotional
drunkiiebabe
oho khushi's feeling for lilly is effecting arnav's feelings for khushi. cool
ReplyDeleteexcellent part of the story
ReplyDeleteloved ma daughter bonding
ARNAV think both as angel loved it